1. Designing an Effective Writing Programme with Reference to the Learning Progression Framework for English Language (New) 1 10 APRIL 2014 ENGLISH LANGUAGE EDUCATION SECTION CURRICULUM DEVELOPMENT INSTITUTE EDUCATION BUREAU

2. Objectives » To introduce the LPF for English Language as a reference tool to design a school-based writing programme and plan for the progressive development of writing skills at the upper primary level; » To provide suggestions on how to fine-tune the existing writing programme by including stimulating writing tasks; and » To provide hands-on activities to examine students' work and introduce effective strategies to give quality feedback and promote assessment for/as learning. 2

3. 2:00 – 2:10 PM Registration 2:10 – 3:00 PM Identifying the key components of a Writing Programme with reference to the Learning Progression Framework (LPF) 3:00 – 3:45 PM Fine-tuning the School-based Writing Programme 3:45 – 4:00 PM Break 4:00 – 4:45 PM Using the LPF to Give Constructive Feedback and Promote Assessment for/as Learning 4:45 – 5:00 PM Q & A 3 Run-down of Today’s Programme

4. 4 Activity 1 In groups, 1.Describe your students’ writing abilities;  Motivation  Writing ideas  Writing performance, e.g. content, organisation, language 2.Share how you develop your students’ writing skills.

5. 5 What is a Learning Progression Framework (LPF)? The LPF: represents the growth of learners on a developmental continuum as they work towards the Learning Targets and Objectives of the English Language curriculum; is made up of Learning Outcomes organised under the four language skills and divided into eight levels of attainment; helps teachers better understand and articulate learners’ performance; and helps teachers plan strategically how to enhance English Language learning, teaching and assessment. ……… 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 Level 8 Learning Outcomes

6. Figure Illustrating the Structure of the LPF for English Language LOs organised & presented under the four language skills LOs for each language skill expressed in the form of outcome statements (a general description of learner performance) Pointers provide specific examples of what learners are able to do in demonstrating the LOs. Underlying Principles elucidate some of the learning objectives which do not lend themselves to the description in terms of 8 levels of attainment but are essential to English language learning. Outcome Statements Underlying Principles Exemplars Exemplars illustrate the expected student performance. 6

7. Aspects of Progression shown in the Productive and Receptive Skills Speaking Writing Content, Organisation and Communication Strategies Language Pronunciation, Stress, Rhythm and Intonation Content Organisation Language and Style Underlying Principles Productive Skills The outcome statements show the progression in terms of: Reading Listening The outcome statements show the progression in terms of: Depth of processing information, ideas and feelings Text complexity Range and application of strategies Receptive Skills Underlying Principles 7

8. In groups, 1.study the outcome statements of the LPF for Writing; 2.sequence them so that they form a developmental continuum of eight levels, based on your personal / teaching experience; 3.Study three exemplars chosen from the e-LPF, identify the levels and use the pointers to comment on the writings. 8 Activity 2

9. In groups, 1.study the writing plans of two schools; and 2.comment on the strengths and weaknesses of the plans. 9 Activity 3

10. writing problems Lack of motivation Incoherent unit plan Poor language Lack of ideas Poor organisation Insufficient vocabulary Inconsistent use of tenses 10

11. 1. Write and reply to short and simple letters to share personal experiences 2. Write short and simple descriptions of objects, people, places and events 3. Write short and simple stories 4. Write and reply to simple letters to share personal experiences 5. Write simple descriptions of objects, people, places and events with some details 6. Write some formal letters to make simple requests and enquiries 7. Write a range of simple texts to describe, recount, record, explain and propose with some supporting details 8. Write stories with a setting, a simple plot and simple characterisation Pointers from Levels 3 – 5 Raising awareness of text type features Using graphic organisers to expand/elaborate ideas Lack of ideas DESIGNING A SCHOOL-BASED WRITING PROGRAMME (CONTENT) 11

12. 1. Use a small range of vocabulary on familiar topics, with most words correctly spelt and some word collocations correct 2. Use a range of adjectives/adjective phrases to describe and compare with some consistency 3. Use a small range of adverbs/adverbial clauses for some communicative functions with some consistency 4. Use a small range of tenses and passive voice with some consistency 5. Use modals for some communicative functions with consistency 6. Show an awareness of using some stylistic features (e.g. using dialogues in stories to create interest, use headings and sub- headings to clarify presentation) to support the purpose of text Pointers from Levels 3 – 5 Inconsistent use of tenses Insufficient vocabulary Poor Language 12 DESIGNING A SCHOOL-BASED WRITING PROGRAMME (LANGUAGE AND STYLE)

13. 1. Establish links using some simple cohesive devices with some consistency 2. Arrange ideas in a short text using short and simple means (e.g. sequencing events chronologically) to show a generally clear focus 3. Arrange ideas in a short text using simple means (e.g. providing illustrations or explanations) to show a generally clear focus 4. Structure the text using paragraphs, including a brief introductory and/or concluding statement 5. Establish links within some paragraphs using a range of cohesive devices with some consistency 6. Arrange ideas in some paragraphs using different means (e.g. using topic sentences) 7. Structure the text using paragraphs Pointers from Levels 3 – 5 Poor organisation 13 DESIGNING A SCHOOL-BASED WRITING PROGRAMME (ORGANISATION)

14. 1.Language development strategies, generic skills, and positive values and attitudes are essential to English Language learning and should form an integral part of the learning-teaching- assessment cycle. 2.The meaningfulness and appropriateness of the written texts to the context, purpose and audience are implicit in and apply across all the learning outcomes. Underlying Principles Lack of Motivation Designing meaningful writing tasks DESIGNING A SCHOOL-BASED WRITING PROGRAMME 14

15. 15 3.The development of writing strategies does not readily lend itself to descriptions in all of the eight levels of learning outcomes, e.g., generating ideas by brainstorming or seeking and selecting information and ideas from different sources revising drafts by adding, deleting, substituting or linking ideas editing drafts by correcting errors in language reflecting on own writing based on feedback from teachers or peers 4.Teacher support is essential to helping learners express and organise their ideas during the learning and teaching process. As learners progress, the amount of support provided could be gradually reduced to promote learner independence Underlying Principles Incoherent unit plan Reflect on current teaching practice Provide support in the L&T process DESIGNING A SCHOOL-BASED WRITING PROGRAMME 15

16. In groups, 1.share interesting writing topics; 2.share ideas and strategies to scaffold the writing skills of the less able students; and 3.share ideas and strategies to stretch the abilities of the more able students. 16 Activity 4

17. Dimensions of vocabulary knowledge Forms Meaning Functions Collocation Vocabulary (e.g. singulars/plurals: a painter, painters parts of speech: paint, painting, painted ) (e.g. look at the painting) (e.g. paint, painter, painting) Improving Students’ Vocabulary Building Strategies 17

18. Approaches in vocabulary learning AREA OF FOCUS Paradigmatic Approach Syntagmatic Approach help pupils expand the size of vocabulary help pupils understand the usage of the vocabulary Improving Students’ Vocabulary Building Strategies 18

19. PEOPLEACTIONSOBJECTSPLACE Chefcookmealsrestaurant Teacher Singer Pilot Syntagmatic Approach Topic: Jobs Improving Students’ Vocabulary Building Strategies 19

20.  Introducing the text type features, format and layout to students explicitly  Raising students’ awareness of the organisation of the text, e.g. through dicto-comp, sequencing events Improving students’ writing skills in the Organisation of Ideas The format of a personal letter

21. Strategies to stretch students’ writing abilities Fiction Non-fiction Fairy tales Adventures Fantasy Fables Dilemma Imaginative stories Writing at KS3 P6 P4P5 To engage students in interesting and meaningful writing activities and to stimulate students to think and write creatively and critically To enhance students’ writing skills progressively to ensure a smooth transition between P6 and S1 News reports Biography/ Autobiography Giving advice Manuals for playing new toys Personal letters Recipes Recounts Journal Writing 21

22.  Providing opportunities for students to write creatively and critically Strategies to stretch students’ writing abilities Some principles: 1.Go beyond the given information 2.Allow time to think 3.Strengthen creative abilities, e.g. look at a situation from several perspectives break away from traditional patterns of thought teach creative thinking techniques http://www.edb.gov.hk/creativethinking_pri 22

23. In groups, 1.analyse the strengths and weaknesses of the following assessment rubrics:  Marking scheme  Peer assessment forms 2.make suggestions on areas for improvement with reference to the LPF. 23 Activity 5

24. engaging students in a range of tasks that cover a variety of purposes and text types developing writing skills progressively catering for diverse learning abilities Key components developing strategies to approach the writing tasks providing support for students to develop vocabulary building strategies understand features of different text types express personal ideas/experience write with imaginative ideas Learning & Teaching Strategies identifying the requirements for each task in terms of the three domains in the LPF guiding students to improve the first draft based on constructive feedback from teachers and/or peers using task specific feedback sheet Assessment as/for learning Steps in Designing an Effective Writing Programme 24