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Young Author Book Trouble Paper
Catchy Title: Rhyming or Alliteration? The mysterious walk of Doom
Intro Examples: What do you get when a browbeating boy meets the cookie chucker? You get a boy with a concussion. You should never ask me to help you brush your hair! If you do you’ll have a minty-fresh hair day. Mom + cell phone +dishwasher = drama. What do you get when you cross a mad mom, a cell phone, and a dishwasher?
Riddle introduction. “What do you get cross a strict mom, a clean house, a paintball gun, and a rebellious 5 th grader with an itchy trigger finger? You get an abstract art masterpiece and a year of grounding.” The mysterious walk of doom. What do you get when you walk for more then two hours? You get a mom chasing you on a unicycle carrying a pig and a week of grounding.
Body #1 Use transitions and put at least 2 feelings and thoughts in this paragraph… “You’d never guess what happened next….” “It all started…” Explain where you were / who you were with It all started when my friend came over to spend the night at my house. Ethan decided to go on a walk. So we went and we were supposed to go around the block but you’d never guess what happened next. “I was bored and I thought it would be fun…” “You’d never guess what happened next….”
Body #2 Use transitions and put at least 2 feelings and thoughts in this paragraph… “The next thing I knew…” Explain what you did wrong here. The next thing I knew we went way past around the block. Instead we went all the way to St.Mary’s! Then I told Ethan that we were going to far but he didn’t listen. So we kept going and going and going. Until we reached Steak n’ Shake. How did you feel? What did you fear?
Body #3 Use transitions and put at least 2 feelings and thoughts in this paragraph… “What did you do to try to avoid trouble? The next thing I knew we went to Walmart! And then we decided to go back. So I tried to avoid trouble by seeing if they were inside and they weren’t. So we went inside and we were thinking that they were fine with it but when they came trough the door is when I got caught. Then my parents said “Where were you?” And we said that we went to Walmart. What were you thinking? How did you get caught? What did your parents say?
Body #4 The chase! Describe in detail how you tried to escape Make sure to explain how you were feeling and what you were thinking! So then we ran trough the back door and started running. Then my mom was on a unicycle with a pig. I was thinking and feeling that we could get away but I was wrong. She trough the pig and tripped us. Luckily we landed on grass instead of the street. Then my mom called my stepdad and told him to pick us up. Also Explain how you were captured!
Conclusion: What was your punishment? What did you learn… a serious lesson. What funny thing did you learn? My punishment was I was grounded for a week. I learned to never walk that far again. I also learned I could outrun my mom on a unicycle with a pig.