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1 So that angels may get their wings, puppies can stop getting kicked, and you may become a more moral and upstanding individual.

2 Let’s Write One Now!

3 THE FIVE PARAGRAPH ESSAY Is not about the number of paragraphs You can have a 12 paragraph, five paragraph essay The main problem is NOT that it’s just 3 points about a subject Though that’s part of the problem The main problem is not that the intro merely says what you’re going to say and the conclusion repeats it all in the most boring way possible Though that’s part of the problem Review

4 Any essay where the order of the points seems completely arbitrary Any essay where mixing up the order of the paragraphs would have no real effect on the essay as a whole Any essay where a point is made and never referenced again (either for reminding the reader or further broadening/examination) Any essay where the connection between points is non- existent or not pointed out to the reader Any essay that stops an angel from getting its wings, causes a puppy to get kicked, or makes you a bad person for writing one The 5PE is:

5 We already discussed one method to prevent this. Adapt your transitions into hybrid transition/topic sentences 1.Quickly recap the point of previous paragraph(s) 2.Preview where the next paragraph(s) are going 3.Highlight the connection between the two ideas (why are you discussing them in this order?) Number 3 is key. If you haven’t thought about a connection then it’s impossible to write this transaction. That should be your clue. Review

6 Cause and Effect Comparison and Contrast Better and Worse If... Then Either... Or Chronologically Problem/Needs/Solutions Theory/Practice/Example But How Do We Organize Our Points? These could possibly be used as a master organizational pattern for a whole essay, or will most certainly be used as organizational mixed-and- matched patterns within the bodies of your paragraphs.

7 Let’s make an example. Let’s purposefully make it an essay of 5 paragraphs but not a five paragraph essay. This paper would also be aptly handled in 4 pages (like your first assignment) Example

8 My Thesis: In only two concise pages, the opening chapter of White Noise (and the reader’s introduction to Jack Gladney) provides a number of hints at the major themes that will encompass the entire novel. Though a reader may not know this upon a first read, a subsequent read shows that, from the beginning, the novel has packed large quantities of meaning into seemingly trivial details. Example

9 The link between consumerism and identity (Jack’s observations about the students arriving on campus) Technological progress infringing upon nature (Jack’s discussion of how the wooded area behind their house is now a freeway) The emphasis on death (Jack’s seemingly random mention of the college’s Chancellor’s death on a ski lift). My Points Chronologically

10 The emphasis on death (Jack’s seemingly random mention of the college’s Chancellor’s death on a ski lift). The link between consumerism and identity (Jack’s observations about the students arriving on campus) Technological progress infringing upon nature (Jack’s discussion of how the wooded area behind their house is now a freeway) My Points (after some thought about how they might connect)

11 Good start, because it’s the central theme of the novel It’s the most random sentence in the first two pages (a pattern that will continue) Jack mentions the death very matter of factly with no emotion or commentary. This is something he does when he’s not concerned with his own death. Hitler studies is mentioned on page 2, but no mention of Hitler as a killer (highlights theme of death as a professional matter versus the “real” scary thing) Emphasis on Death

12 Long list of student possessions that takes up most of page one Jack can relate because he has possessions that make up his identity and his family’s (robe, watch, green visor, camouflage outfit) This scene previews a major scene in the novel where Jack’s identity is under threat and he rushes to the mall to shop compulsively and regain his strength/identity But why discuss this now? How does it connect to previous paragraph? To consume is to assert your life; to have possessions is to have the weight of existence (allows reference back to death) Malls are full of crowds, crowds ward of death (allows me to discuss those students as a crowd and relate the implications back to death discussion of previous paragraph Consumerism and Identity

13 Jack mentions that the woods were cleared behind his house for a freeway (note how little time is spent in malls, cars, schools versus nature. And when in nature in the novel- nature is under threat- ATE) This is the college on the hill (with connotations of nature) but is being assaulted by station wagons and brand name products Mention any number of places in novel that show this (nobody trusts natural senses, media messages rule, plenty of mechanical/electrical noises in novel- no nature noises. But why discuss this now? How does it connect to previous paragraphs? Consumer technology is linked to identity too (the ATM machine) ATE is about death, it’s technologically made, and exposure to it converts Jack’s identity into nothing more than “the sum of his data.” The waves and radiation are “the dead’s way of speaking to the living.” (connects to death point, and groups of consumers) Technological Progress Infringes Upon the Natural

14 Will do ANYTHING more interesting than just summing up what the reader just read about. Likely, I would want my final paragraph to make a final point about what it means that the first two pages are so short but still manage to telegraph so much of what is coming. In other words, I make a final point about DeLillo’s style- not just rattle off the 3 points I just made. My Conclusion Synthesis

15 Since death sits at the center of all themes in the novel, it’s not surprising that a human death would be mentioned merely two pages into the novel. Transition #1

16 Although a fear of death permeates the novel and many of its characters’ thoughts and conversations, DeLillo uses another theme to suggest that there is a way to temporarily keep these anxieties at bay. The process of consumption (in all its forms) shores up a person’s identity in an effort to be larger than the death they fear. Transition #2

17 If consumerism rewards (and fails) the characters in a number of ways related to their very identities, the theme of technology trumping nature further illustrates this duality by showing how the late 20 th century identity is tied into capitalistic machines that both enhance our lives and connect us with the deceased. Transition #3


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