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1 Composition Composition 图表作文

2 Structure From the graph ( table, chart ), we can clearly see the increase ( decrease ) of _______. It added up to ( decreased ) ___________ in 19____, while it increased ( decreased,were,was ) to _____in 19____. Therefore, it can be predicated that ________ is ( are ) to be on the rise ( on the decrease) in the future.

3 There are chiefly _______ reasons for the increase ( decline ). In the first place, owing to ______, _______have realized the importance of _______. Secondly, with the development of ( with the growth of, with the increase of, with the improvement of ), ________ have adopted more active and effective methods.

4 In spite of what’s mentioned above, there are some problems. The graph indicates that _______ was ( were ) fluctuated ( 波动 ). Hence, the situation is still serious and how to improve ________ is still a challenging task.

5 Composition 图表作文 Model 1

6 Graph1:The Production of TV Sets Graph2:The Production of Radios

7 From the graph, we can clearly see the increase in production of TV sets in a certain factory.In 1980, the production of TV sets in the factory was only 500 sets. While in 1990, after ten years, the output rose to 3,000 sets. At the same time, with the production of TV sets going up, the production of radios was coming down. It fell from 3,000 sets in 1980 to 500 sets in 1990.Therefore, it can predicated that the output of TV sets are to be on the rise in the future.

8 There are chiefly three reasons for the increase. In the first place, owing to the advances in science and technology, the electronic industry has been developing faster and faster, which makes it possible for factories to produce more advanced domestic equipment. Secondly, with the improvement of the living standard, people have made more money and became richer and richer today. TV sets easily enter into almost all households. Moreover, thanks to the increasing desire for entertainment and being well-informed, people turn to TV to relax themselves.

9 All these in turn demand factories to produce larger quantities and higher quality of TV sets. That is why the production of TV sets in the factory is on the increase, while that of radios sets is on the decline

10 Composition 图表作文Model2

11 Diet and Health Outline 1. 说明正常身体每日所需热能与蛋白质的量。 2. 举例说明美国与印度每人每日所摄取的热 能和蛋白质与寿命的关系并得出结论。

12 The Graph Country Daily Calorie Intake Per Grams Daily Total Protein Intake Per Capita Life Expectancy At Five years U. S. A320095.668 U. K.315087.568 Mexico225065.761 Japan246074.767 India 181045.548 Basic Requirement For proper Health 250040

13 From the graph, we can clearly see that a dietary intake of about 2500 calories and 40 grams of protein a day is a basic requirement for proper health. Therefore, it can predicated (assumed) that if the protein intake in the diet falls below a certain level, it will lead to malnutrition and disease.

14 Take the United States and India for example, on the one hand, the United Stated is a developed country, people have far more calories and protein than necessary for health. They have a daily intake of 3200 calories and 95.6 grams of protein, which considerably exceeds the basic requirement.

15 On the other hand, in the developing counties like India, people have fewer calories than necessary, almost everyone gets a much lower daily intake of calories than considered basic, that is ( namely ), 1810 instead of 2500, and a bit more than the minimum amount of protein, about 45 grams. Obviously, India has a much lower life expectancy than the United States, 47 instead of 71 years.

16 It can be concluded that there is a close link between low intake of calories and protein, and life expectancy. If you intake more calories and protein, your life is long, on the contrary/in contrast, your life is short.

17 Composition 图表作文Model3

18 Changes in People Diet Outline: 1.state the changes in people’s diet in the past five years 2.give possible reasons for the changes 3.draw your own conclusion

19 The Graph Year/food 19921993199419951996 Grain49%47%46.5%45% Milk10%11% 12%13% Meat17%20%22.5%23%23.5% Fruit Vegetable 24%22%20% 21% Total100%

20 From the graph, we can clearly see that great changes have been taking place in people’s diet over the period from 1992 to 1996. The consumption of grain is decreasing year by year, while that of some high energy food, such as milk and meat, is increasing steadily.

21 There are two major reasons. In the first place, with the improvement in the living standard, people can afford to buy much more expensive food with better nutrition. Secondly, people now pay more attention to the quality of it, because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way. Therefore, they try their best to improve the structure of their food.

22 From the above, we can see that people’s living level has been rising markedly in the past five years. And it can be concluded that there will be a more prosperous future waiting for us.

23 Composition Composition 阐明不同观点的作文

24 Different people have different attitudes/opinions on the question/matter/problem. Answers to the question vary greatly. Some people think that this phenomenon is good, while others/other people believe/feel that it is bad. As is known to all. Everything has two sides. Let’s follow up. (The following is what I think. / What I think is as follows.)

25 Some people are in favor of the problem.( there are some advantages.) In the first place, __________________; Secondly, _________________; Moreover,_________________________; What’s more, (important of all)________________.

26 However, other people are disapproval of it.( there are some disadvantages.) First of all, __________; In addition, _______________. Besides, ______________. What’s worse,_________________________.

27 In short. There is some truth in the arguments, but, as far as I am concerned, I think that _______________________.

28 Composition 阐明不同观点的作文Model1

29 Advantages and Disadvantages of Uniform Different people have different attitudes/opinions on uniform. Answers to the question vary greatly. Some people think that this phenomenon is good, while others/other people believe/feel that it is bad. As is known to all. Everything has two sides. Let’s follow up.

30 There are some advantages. In the first place, in the eyes of most people, uniform looks more professional than civilian clothes; Secondly, people have become conditioned to expect superior quality from a man in uniform, for example, repairman who wears a uniform tends to inspire more trust; What’s more, (important of all) uniform can save money, such as other clothes and laundry bills, they are often more comfortable and more durable.

31 However, there are some disadvantages. First of all, their lack of variety and individuality experienced by people who must wear them is primary, for instance, the wearer is generally stuck with it, without change, until retirement. In addition, their initial expense is greater than the cost of civilian clothes; What’s worse, some uniforms are expensive to maintain, requiring professional dry cleaning rather than the home laundry.

32 In short. There is some truth in the arguments, but, as far as I am concerned, I prefer to wear a uniform, because it can provide the wearer with a professional identity.( I oppose it, because it tends to lose individuality.)

33 Composition 阐明不同观点的作文 Model 2

34 My viewpoint on China’s Entry into WTO Outline: 1 .入世带来的机遇 2 .入世带来的冲击与挑战 3 .我该怎么办

35 Different people have different attitudes/opinions on China’s entry WTO. Answers to the question vary greatly. Some people think that this phenomenon is good, while others/other people believe/feel that it is bad. As is known to all. Everything has two sides. Let’s follow up.

36 There are some advantages. In the first place, after China’s WTO entry, China will open wider to the outside world, which will speed up its overall economic reform. In addition, China can make full use of the global sales network and channels, striving for great changes in market structure. Moreover, China’s WTO entry will help it absorb much more foreign capital, which will create countless job opportunities by setting up more jointly-funded and foreign- funded enterprises. What’s more, it will nourish textile and tourist industries.

37 However, it is inevitable that WTO entry will bring certain buffet and challenges. First of all, the all-round opening will exert greater pressure and competition on car, telecom and many other industries. Second, the demerits existing in domestic companies such as loose management, rigid system, outdated methods of operation and low level of technology and network application will lower their competitiveness in the global economic market. Worse of all, many high expertise professionals may be lured away by joint ventures

38 In short, there is some truth in both arguments. What should I do when I am faced with such a situation? As far as I am concerned, we should grasp opportunities and meet challenges brought about by the WTO accession ( entry ). As a college students we must equip ourselves with knowledge and true capacity so as to be more competitive in the society.

39 看图作文

40 Useful structures 1 Nowadays______ is fashionable______ But as is shown in the cartoon, _______. As far as I am concerned, _________ should ______. However,___________. The given cartoon is a forceful satire on the kind of ______________

41 Useful structures 2 As is shown by the two pictures, _________ _______________________,While__________ ________________________.It is clear that ___________________________. Obviously, ( It is obvious that ) the drawer, through these two pictures, aims at revealing to us the ______________. This problem, if not solved immediately and properly, will ________ ___________________________________.

42 To solve the problem, both the _____ and the _____ should make a sustained effort. For the ______, it should not only make ______ and ______ but also heighten people’s awareness of _______.

43 As for the broad masses of the people, they should also _________. In a word, if the ______ and the ______ have really realized the problem and work hard on it, there is certain to be an encouraging prospect in _______________________ _________________________________.

44 Model composition 1 As is shown by the two pictures, There was a great deal of groundwater in the early 1900s, while in 1980s, the groundwater level was extremely low ( became less and less ). It is clear that the problem of the serious shortage of groundwater resources has arisen.

45 Obviously, ( It is obvious that ) the drawer, through these two pictures, aims at revealing to us the shortage and exhaustion of all natural resources. From 1900s to 1980s, within less than a century, the rapid growth in population and fast development of industries, together with the weak sense of natural resource protection caused the excessive opening up and irrational use of natural resources

46 And this finally led to the serious shortage and exhaustion of not only groundwater but also many other natural resources including land, mineral resources, and so on. This problem, if not solved immediately and properly, will further endanger the existence and development of man himself.

47 To solve the problem, both the government and the society should make a sustained effort. For the government, it should not only make new laws and regulations but also heighten people’s awareness of natural resources protection. As for the broad masses of the people, they should also fully understand the importance of protecting forest reserves as well as other natural resources.

48 In a word, if the government and the society have really realized the problem and work hard on it, there is certain to be an encouraging prospect in natural resources protection.

49 Model composition 2 As is shown by the two pictures, the mountain was covered with dense forest in 1990, while in 1980, there was nearly no tree left on the mountain. It is clear that the severe deforestation ( 乱砍乱伐 ) has resulted in the serious shortage of forest reserves.

50 Obviously, ( It is obvious that ) the drawer, through these two pictures, aims at revealing to us the shortage and exhaustion of all natural resources. From 1910 to 1980, the rapid growth in population and fast development of industries, together with the weak sense of natural resource protection caused the excessive opening up and irrational use of natural resources.

51 And this finally led to the serious shortage and exhaustion of not only forest reserves but also many other natural resources including land, mineral resources, and so on. This problem, if not solved immediately and properly, will further endanger the existence and development of man himself.

52 To solve the problem, both the government and the society should make a sustained effort. For the government, it should not only make new laws and regulations but also heighten people’s awareness of natural resources protection. As for the broad masses of the people, they should also fully understand the importance of protecting forest reserves as well as other natural resources.

53 In a word, if the government and the society have really realized the problem and work hard on it, there is certain to be an encouraging prospect in natural resources protection.

54 议论文

55 Useful structures 1 ____is a common phenomenon in our society. ____is a very popular topic which is much talked about not only by _______ but also by _____________. From___ to ____, ______________. This is not only aimed at_____ but also at______ As a result, ______________, when it comes to ______________.

56 Therefore, China is challenging __________ by advocating _______. It focus on_________. While ____________ will no longer play a key role in _______________. In short, As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe in the magic force of ____________. It seems that I have seen in my mind’s eye the more colorful life, the looser environment, the more creative minds of ___________.

57 Model composition 1 Education system is a common phenomenon in our society. Especially quality-oriented examination is a very popular topic that is much talked about not only by students, teachers and parents, but also by the government.

58 From primary school to college, students, teachers and parents are struggling for high scores, this is because the current education system is not aimed at students’ quality, but also at developing their ability to perform well on the tests. As a result, many students even those with high scores often do poorly when it comes to the practical application of what they’ve learned.

59 Therefore, China is challenging examination-oriented education by advocating quality-oriented education. It will focus on the students’ ability as a whole. The examination results will no longer play a key role in evaluating a student.

60 In short. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe in the magic force of this new policy. It seems that I have seen in my mind’s eye the more colorful life, the looser environment, the more creative minds of the future students. Our education, so to speak, will bring up a new generation.

61 Model composition 2 Interpersonal relationship is a common phenomenon in our society. It is a very popular topic that is much talked about not only by people of one kind or another.

62 Since we are social beings, we need give and get support from one another, especially under stressful circumstances. Therefore, It is obvious that interpersonal relationship is of great important. In the first place, those of us with strong social ties appear better able to copy with major life changes and daily difficulties, meanwhile, they live longer and have better health than those without such ties.

63 Secondly, people’s self-respect is strengthened when people fee accepted by others, In addition, other people help us to find and solve the problems. Moreover, social companionship can distract people from their worries and troubles, because engaging in leisure-time activities helps people to meet their social needs.

64 What’s more, others may give us instrumental support, such as financial aid material resources and needed services.

65 In short, in the competitive society, the quality of our lives depends in large measure on our interpersonal ties. We should pay more attention it.

66 Model composition 3 打折是商家吸引顾客的一种手段 近年来人们对商家打折的兴趣日趋减少 打折不是市场的万能药

67 Discount is a common phenomenon in our society. It is a very popular topic which is much talked about by all kinds of people. This is because discount is a business means of attracting customers and enhancing their desire of purchasing. After years' craze about discount, however, discount is losing its appeal.

68 There are several reasons for this. For one thing, customers are more mature and sensible. They are more careful about their money and have a more reasonable budget. For another, customers begin to suspect what is behind the attractive appearance of discount, for example, how much are the articles on sale really worth? And how much money may the sellers earn if they sell at original prices? As a result, discount seems to them more like deception than a good bargain.

69 In short, as far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that discount is not a cure-all for the sellers. Nowadays some sensible enterprises achieve success in competition by advocating improving quality and widening the range of products and using their marketing strategy. They will focus on the products’ quality and services as a whole. The market become increasingly mature, the sellers have to adapt themselves to the change from a customer- oriented point of view.

70 Useful structures 2 Nowadays the problem is even more serious. With____. At the same time, ____ has become an obstacle on the path of ________. The problem of _____ is put under extreme stress mainly because of three reasons. In the first place, _____________. Secondly,________ __________. Finally,____________________. As a result,________________________

71 To relieve /solve___________, active and effective measures taken are indispensable. First of all ______ And then______. If______ can be well under way, it won’t be long for______ to get an easy breath.

72 Model composition 4 Pollution (Preserving Environment )

73 Nowadays the problem of pollution is even more serious. With the pollution increasing, more and more plants, trees and crops are destroyed by bad air, many fish die of poisonous water, thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. Environmental pollution makes many people fall ill. It does great harm to man, It has become an obstacle on the path of human survive.

74 The problem of pollution is put under extreme stress mainly because of three reasons. In the first place, natural resources are used excessively to destroy ecological balance. Secondly, massive polluted waste ( harmful materials /substances) in the course of production, for example, to prevent insects, peasants make use of large amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvest, wastes from factories and houses also pollute the environment

75 Finally, The gases released from the car engines are very poisonous. As a result, preserving the environment is of crucial important to us around the world.

76 To solve the problem, active and effective measures taken are indispensable. First of all, more and more cities are building sewage treatment plants. And then many cars are equipped with pollution-control devices. If these steps can be well under way, it won’t be long to create a clean world.

77 Model composition 5 Rear Service

78 Nowadays the rear service problem is even more serious. With the enlargement of college enrollment, the rear service falls far behind the need. At the same time, due to its large staff and consumption, it has become an obstacle on the path of the development of universities and colleges.

79 The rear service problem is put under extreme stress mainly because of three reasons. Firstly, the working methods of the rear service establish have been outmoded. With the number of students soaring and the inefficiency of those rear service departments, problem like food and shelter pile up. Secondly, the size of rear service is on the rise, with redundancy being a common phenomenon. Statistics show that, on average, two-thirds of the total college staff are administrative personnel and workers. Finally, it costs way too much to keep rear service running. And a serious waste of money and energy on rear service is always a heavy burden which delays the development of university.

80 To relieve universities and colleges of this burden-----rear service, reform in rear service system is indispensable. First of all, the rear service should be detached from colleges. And then, increased efficiency, improvement of working methods as well as cut of redundancy are all necessary. If the reform can be well under way, it won’t be long before universities and college to get an easy breath.

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