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Developing a Productive Academic Vocabulary for Writing Diane Schmitt email@example.com TESOL 2008 New York, New York
Aims Take a “simple” lexical use problem Use learner corpora to understand how the lexical item is being used Use expert corpora to help students notice the gap between their own use and that of more experienced writers
Extract from a student essay – 1a Secondly, a significant internal reform in China is the acceleration of strong and comprehensive cooperative arrangements between China ’ s education industry and foreign providers. The most significant development is that non-governmental private education is the fastest growing ____wc____ of higher education in China. Private businesses and enterprises, non-profit agencies, community groups and individuals are establishing non-governmental private institutions (MoE.P.R.C., 2006).
segment noun segment [countable] 1 a part of something that is different from or affected differently from the whole in some way segment of segments of the population 2 a part of a fruit, flower, or insect that it naturally divides into: Decorate with orange segments. 3 technical the part of a circle that is separated from the rest of the circle when you draw a straight line across it 4 technical the part of a line or of a length of something between two points segment of segments of DNA (from the Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English)
area noun S1W1 [countable] 1 a particular part of a country, town etc in an area Only cheeses made in this area may be labelled 'Roquefort.' There were over 2 inches of rain in coastal areas. area of a working-class area of Birmingham Many areas of Africa have suffered severe drought this year. a rural area (=countryside) of woodlands and fields Crime rates are significantly higher in urban areas (=towns, cities etc). The police have searched the farm and the surrounding area (=the area around it). children from the local area a residential area of the town
area noun 2 a part of a house, office, garden etc that is used for a particular purpose: a no-smoking area Their apartment has a large kitchen area. Come through into the dining area. the reception area of the hotel a storage area on the ground floor 3 a particular subject, range of activities, or group of related subjects: The course covers three main subject areas. This study has clearly identified a major problem area for the National Health Service. We're funding research into new areas such as law enforcement technology. area of reforms in the key areas of health and education
area noun 4 the amount of space that a flat surface or shape covers area of an area of 2,000 square miles a formula to calculate the area of a circle ➔ grey area at grey 1 (7) (from the Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English)
Extract from a student essay – 1b Secondly, a significant internal reform in China is accelerating strong and comprehensive cooperation between China ’ s educational industry and Foreign Service provider. The most dramatically point is non- governmental private education constitutes develop in the fastest growing aspect of higher education in China. Businesses or enterprises, non-profit agencies, community groups or individuals establish non- governmental private institutions (MoE.P.R.C 2006).
aspect noun S3W1 1 [countable] one part of a situation, idea, plan etc that has many parts aspect of Dealing with people is the most important aspect of my work. Alcoholism affects all aspects of family life. 2 [countable] the direction in which a window, room, front of a building etc faces: a south-facing aspect 3 [singular, uncountable] literary the appearance of someone or something: The storm outside gave the room a sinister aspect. 4 [uncountable and countable] technical the form of a verb in grammar that shows whether an action is continuing, or happens always, again and again, or once: 'He sings' differs from 'He is singing' in aspect. (Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English)
Do we send the student looking for another word?
feature noun featureS2W1 [countable] 1 a part of something that you notice because it seems important, interesting, or typical: Air bags are a standard feature in most new cars. feature of An important feature of Van Gogh's paintings is their bright colours. common feature Striped tails are a common feature of many animals. The hotel's only redeeming features (=things that make it acceptable) were that it was cheap and near the city centre. main/important/significant etc feature The most distinctive feature of the dinosaurs was their size. One of the distinguishing features (=features that are different from other things of the same sort) of modern banking is its dependence on computers. (Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English)
Extract from a student essay - 2 “ Global networks have been dramatically affected by the development of new machines and technologies, [such as] … fiber optic cables, jet planes, audio-visual transmissions, digital TV, computer networks including the internet and satellites, which shrink time-space ” (Scott, 1998:5-6). They have influenced the social world in various ____wc_____. One of the most important areas is higher education.
Extract from a student essay - 2 “ Global networks have been dramatically affected by the development of new machines and technologies, [such as] … fiber optic cables, jet planes, audio-visual transmissions, digital TV, computer networks including the internet and satellites, which shrink time-space ” (Scott, 1998:5-6). They have influenced the social world in various aspects. One of the most important areas is higher education. 1 [countable] one part of a situation, idea, plan etc that has many parts aspect of Dealing with people is the most important aspect of my work. Alcoholism affects all aspects of family life.
22 occurrences of aspect across 9 student papers Wordsmith Tools
Change the word? By using the word choice (wc) editing code I’m encouraging the students to look for a new word This ignores that fact that many of the students are attempting to use the word aspect An alternative approach would be to focus on the word (or phrase) students are attempting to use What is inappropriate and what’s not?
What can we learn from students current use of the word aspect? What is causing the awkwardness? Word knowledge
What do we mean by correctness when talking about vocabulary use? Word knowledge Partial knowledge Incremental view of vocabulary learning
Tracking Incremental Learning through repeated extensive readings 0= I definitely don't know what this word means 1 = I am not really sure what this word means 2 = I think I know what this word means 3 = I definitely know what this word means (Horst, 2000; Cobb, 2007) Time n +1 reading 1 0123 0752793 1420 6 2241335 300775
The Scope of the Vocabulary Learning Task Large vocabulary needed Various kinds of word knowledge needed Vocabulary learning is incremental Vocabulary learning requires consolidation Vocabulary learning requires enhancement of partial knowledge Need to know phrasal vocabulary as well as individual words
How can students get beyond this kind of usage problem and enhance knowledge of aspect?
Students should read widely to see how this word is used in texts
How can students get beyond this kind of usage problem and enhance knowledge of aspect? Students should read widely to see how this word is used in texts Occurrences of aspect AWL word (sub-list 2) 39.4 per million in the BNC 2000 most frequent words
Common frequency benchmarks (Biber et al., 1999) Occurrences per million words Speech – occurs once every: Writing – occurs once every: 10008.5 minutes2.5 pages 20042.5 minutes12 pages 10085 minutes25 pages 40200 minutes60 pages 20400 minutes125 pages 10800 minutes250 pages
How can students get beyond this kind of usage problem and enhance knowledge of aspect? Essay specific mini-corpus 9 texts (116,254 words) 25 occurrences of aspect(s) across 6 texts
How can students get beyond this kind of usage problem and enhance knowledge of aspect? Essay specific mini-corpus 9 texts (116,254 words) 25 occurrences across 6 texts Student writing mini-corpus 11 texts (24,621 words) 22 occurrences across 9 texts 15 problematic in some way
22 occurrences of aspect across 9 student papers Wordsmith Tools
Learner data 1he demands of market. Actually, the two aspects are the essential parts within t 2g the most obvious examples. In various aspects, China can and will be of paramo 3ization of higher education is economic aspect. Educational quality is increasin 4more likely focus on the following five aspects: Firstly, Chinese higher educ 5ld in linking together and affects many aspects. Higher education plays one of t 6ciety to facilitate and advance in many aspects in China. 7lobalization has an undeniably material aspect in so far as it is possible to id 8start doing analysis is to decide which aspect of it we will delve into. As 9stitutes develop in the fastest growing aspect of higher education in China. Bus 10n the world is affecting almost all the aspects of our societies. It seems a ver 11transformation of high education in the aspects of society, economy and itself. 12rspective, globalization impacts on all aspects of UK's higher education. This e 13ines the context relating the following aspects of China's higher education. In 14rrying out the policy was a fundamental aspect of cultural construction." In th 15r policy led to profound changes in all aspects of Chinese society. The higher e 16plores the transformations of HE in the aspects of society, economy and itself i 17ransformations and changes in different aspects of high education, such as the g 18, the WTO's attempts to standardize all aspects of education around the globe c 19l exchange has been enhanced in various aspects: students and staff flows betwe√ 20earning affect higher education in many aspects, such as, change the organizatio 21e of the most remarkable and noteworthy aspect. That is not only because high ed 22rse culture, even to interchange in few aspects to benefit from each other. Acco
Learner data 1 he demands of market. Actually, the two aspects are the essential parts within t 2 g the most obvious examples. In various aspects, China can and will be of paramo 3 ization of higher education is economic aspect. Educational quality is increasin 5 ld in linking together and affects many aspects. Higher education plays one of t 6 ciety to facilitate and advance in many aspects in China. 9 stitutes develop in the fastest growing aspect of higher education in China. Bus 10 n the world is affecting almost all the aspects of our societies. It seems a ver 11 transformation of high education in the aspects of society, economy and itself. 13 ines the context relating the following aspects of China's higher education. In 16 plores the transformations of HE in the aspects of society, economy and itself i 17 ransformations and changes in different aspects of high education, such as the g 19 l exchange has been enhanced in various aspects: students and staff flows betwe√ 20 earning affect higher education in many aspects, such as, change the organizatio 21 e of the most remarkable and noteworthy aspect. That is not only because high ed 22 rse culture, even to interchange in few aspects to benefit from each other. Acco
Steps in my process 1. Read student essays 2. Notice awkward use of a word 3. Create a mini-learner corpus from all student essays for this assignment 4. Search for patterns of misuse of word 5. Compare with another learner corpus 6. Compare with native speaker corpus 7. Plan corpus informed instructional intervention
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Aspect a lot of political, economic and social policy in Hong Kong. In the political aspect, he implemented a very radical change in Hong Kong. The people in Hong Which I have watched a documentary on T. V. Everything is change to modernism aspect in China. For instant, trading, economy and Commercial development whi songs. I was so embarressed that I could not sing very well. For the academic aspect, I was interested in Mathesmatic and Science. Both of the subjects did G on the sidewalk to cross the road of busy traffic safe and sound. As for good aspect, social rituals provide us with available unitive rules that maintain th Me, my mind had become more open, and I start to see the world in a different aspect. Though sometimes I still feel stressful, but I ' m starting to tell my image in his poem, it ' s liked a gleaner. Reading the poem we can be in the aspect of inspection or enter into the autumn world and Keat ' s feelings. Keat ms arising from exempting the valve division from the cutbacks : Concerning this aspect of a possible solution it is not difficult to realize that the other divi, because this product had failed to win acceptance in the market. An important aspect would be the consequences if Maynard will fail. As he owes them 500. 00 nt role. If a man has enough self - assurance he realizes it as a very positive aspect that women are intelligent too. There are so many different points of vi The younger and therefore weaker members of the family. Secondly, there is the aspect of wrong idols especially teenagers tend to identify with. Such super - there were more possibilities to find a job. When cities changed their original aspect there was the necessity to create new structures as there were too many p fic and buses. As it is possible to see on the map the town will not change his aspect, can have only benefits from a such choice. Less traffic, less smog, 2 ) Comfort : the train are really comfortable there is nothing to add. On this aspect you provide one of the best service I had ever experienced. 3 ) Reliabil o much. they prefer to perform actions rather than to talk. And then, another aspect must be take into account : a women loves compromises. But no a man ! He piece of jewelry, possibly of the last century. In my opinion the most typical aspect of this market is not only the range of goods it shows, but also the peo nd themselves involved in some mad project. The need for peace is not a typical aspect of one of the two sexes. Some may say that women have an innate mother i lary, a big scene get the force to people, too. But, Movie at home have good aspect than movie in theaters. Movie at home can stop the movie. If, suddly, Of course, I like EJ ELS is very good school. But, I don ' t like few aspect. For example, tution is very expensive. And there are the school build the united States. If it were not for their own rhythmic sense, American music aspect would be different from now. It is not strange that they have contribute should not have recieve foreigner to sumo world from the beginning. From these aspect we should not regard sumo as ordinal sport. I think a nation must have s ositive point is that I felt it was good for us to dream. And the most negative aspect was.... I couldn ' t think ! 4. I think money is good for both evelopment. In development projects, it is necessary to examine various social aspect : when education project is planned, consideration to public sector ' s Family members after he ' s retired. But for women, becoming old has many good aspect I think. First of all, women have a lot of time after their children le