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Unit Three Letter of Thanks and Congratulation. Part One Gratitude 1. Cultural Background 1. Cultural Background 在英美国家,人们至今还习惯于写感谢信来表 达自己最真诚的谢意。感谢信广泛应用于日常.

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1 Unit Three Letter of Thanks and Congratulation

2 Part One Gratitude 1. Cultural Background 1. Cultural Background 在英美国家,人们至今还习惯于写感谢信来表 达自己最真诚的谢意。感谢信广泛应用于日常 社会交往和商务活动中。 在英美国家,人们至今还习惯于写感谢信来表 达自己最真诚的谢意。感谢信广泛应用于日常 社会交往和商务活动中。 当收到礼物,得到帮助、照顾、款待或祝贺时, 应写信道谢; 当收到礼物,得到帮助、照顾、款待或祝贺时, 应写信道谢; 商务活动中,对客户或供应商的支持、建议、 服务,应写信表感谢,以加强企业间的联系, 同时帮助树立良好形象。 商务活动中,对客户或供应商的支持、建议、 服务,应写信表感谢,以加强企业间的联系, 同时帮助树立良好形象。

3 2 、 Form 2 、 Form 感谢信通常分为正式感谢信和非正式感谢 信,前者行文得体、语气礼貌谦恭、用词 正式正规;后者语气则更加亲切热情。 感谢信通常分为正式感谢信和非正式感谢 信,前者行文得体、语气礼貌谦恭、用词 正式正规;后者语气则更加亲切热情。

4 3. Requirements 3. Requirements 1) Faithful 1) Faithful 缺乏真挚的感情去答谢他人,收信人将对 你的谢意产生怀疑,感谢的目的就失去了。 因此,写感谢信首先要真心诚意。 缺乏真挚的感情去答谢他人,收信人将对 你的谢意产生怀疑,感谢的目的就失去了。 因此,写感谢信首先要真心诚意。

5 2). Specific 2). Specific 切忌泛泛而谈,而应着重于具体的感谢事 由。对感谢的理由要做具体的说明 切忌泛泛而谈,而应着重于具体的感谢事 由。对感谢的理由要做具体的说明 3). Timely 3). Timely 收到别人礼物、得到别人的帮助,应及时 写信予以答谢。否则,人家会对你的谢意 大打折扣。 收到别人礼物、得到别人的帮助,应及时 写信予以答谢。否则,人家会对你的谢意 大打折扣。

6 4 、 Frame 4 、 Frame 表达感谢之情并说明原因 表达感谢之情并说明原因 提及自己曾受到对方的帮助 提及自己曾受到对方的帮助 再次感谢并表达回报愿望 再次感谢并表达回报愿望 Tips: Tips: 表达的感激之情要恰到好处,不要过于夸张。 表达的感激之情要恰到好处,不要过于夸张。 建议在结尾尽量表达希望回报对方的愿望,显得 更加真诚。 建议在结尾尽量表达希望回报对方的愿望,显得 更加真诚。

7 5. Sample 5. Sample You have just come back from a student exchange program in the U.S. Write a letter to your host family in New York to express your gratitude for their hospitality, describe the help they gave you, offer to repay their help and invite them to visit you. You have just come back from a student exchange program in the U.S. Write a letter to your host family in New York to express your gratitude for their hospitality, describe the help they gave you, offer to repay their help and invite them to visit you.

8 Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith, Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith, I am now back to China safe and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you and your lovely children for your kindness and hospitality to host me when I was in New York. Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a beautiful memory. I am now back to China safe and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you and your lovely children for your kindness and hospitality to host me when I was in New York. Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a beautiful memory.

9 I do hope that your whole family pay a visit to China in future, so that I could have the opportunity to repay your friendship. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at your home. I do hope that your whole family pay a visit to China in future, so that I could have the opportunity to repay your friendship. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at your home. I feel obliged to thank you once more. I feel obliged to thank you once more. Sincerely yours, Sincerely yours, Li Ming Li Ming

10 万能句型: 万能句型: In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to… In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to… Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a beautiful memory. Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a beautiful memory. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at your home. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at your home. I feel obliged to thank you once more. I feel obliged to thank you once more.

11 6. Useful Patterns 6. Useful Patterns 1) Please accept my sincere appreciation for … 1) Please accept my sincere appreciation for … 请接受我对 …… 真挚的感谢 请接受我对 …… 真挚的感谢 2) I am truly grateful to you for …… 2) I am truly grateful to you for …… 为了 …… ,我真心感激您 为了 …… ,我真心感激您 3) It was good ( thoughtful ) of you …… 3) It was good ( thoughtful ) of you …… 承蒙好意(关心) …… 承蒙好意(关心) …… 4) You were so kind to send …… 4) You were so kind to send …… 承蒙好意送来 …… 承蒙好意送来 ……

12 5) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 5) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感谢您的盛情款待,并期待不久见到您 再次感谢您的盛情款待,并期待不久见到您 6 ) I find an ordinary "thank-you" entirely inadequate to tell you how much…… 6 ) I find an ordinary "thank-you" entirely inadequate to tell you how much…… 我觉得一般的感谢的字眼完全不足以表达我对您多么 地 …… 我觉得一般的感谢的字眼完全不足以表达我对您多么 地 …… 7 ) I sincerely appreciate …… 我衷心地感谢 …… 7 ) I sincerely appreciate …… 我衷心地感谢 …… 8 ) I wish to express my profound appreciation for …… 8 ) I wish to express my profound appreciation for …… 我对 …… 深表谢意 我对 …… 深表谢意 9 ) Many thanks for you generous cooperation. 9 ) Many thanks for you generous cooperation.

13 Some Tips Using stationery is always a nice touch. If you are thanking someone for a gift given at an event, try stationery that matching colors and styles of the event. Using stationery is always a nice touch. If you are thanking someone for a gift given at an event, try stationery that matching colors and styles of the event. Send a thank-you note as soon as possible so the recipient does not feel that you have forgotten her or him. Send a thank-you note as soon as possible so the recipient does not feel that you have forgotten her or him. If you have several thank-you letters to write, consider buying a box of gift cards. If you have several thank-you letters to write, consider buying a box of gift cards. Thanks should be expressed for material and immaterial things. Someone who helped set up or clean up should be thanked just as much as the person who threw the party. Thanks should be expressed for material and immaterial things. Someone who helped set up or clean up should be thanked just as much as the person who threw the party.

14 Include a return address. Include a return address. If the letter is to a good friend, you can include an inside joke or a bit of news for a more personal touch. If the letter is to a good friend, you can include an inside joke or a bit of news for a more personal touch. If you are sending several thank you notes, be careful not to say exactly the same thing in each one. Make each note personal. It will mean more that way. If you are sending several thank you notes, be careful not to say exactly the same thing in each one. Make each note personal. It will mean more that way. A thank-you note need not be long, just genuine. If blank space on the page bugs you, use a small notecard rather than a larger sheet of paper. A thank-you note need not be long, just genuine. If blank space on the page bugs you, use a small notecard rather than a larger sheet of paper.

15 Some Warnings Do not send thank-you notes via . Do not send thank-you notes via . Send your thank-you note via postal mail always, even if you see the person every day or week. Send your thank-you note via postal mail always, even if you see the person every day or week. Should you decide to go the handwritten route, don't use a pencil to write the address or note itself. The address can smear and then your letter won't arrive and also the note could smudge and look dirty, taking away from the nice feeling you have tried to create. Should you decide to go the handwritten route, don't use a pencil to write the address or note itself. The address can smear and then your letter won't arrive and also the note could smudge and look dirty, taking away from the nice feeling you have tried to create. Make sure your writing is legible. Make sure your writing is legible. Never write a snide or sarcastic thank-you note. It is better to say nothing than to prove that you cannot be grateful for someone's time and effort. Never write a snide or sarcastic thank-you note. It is better to say nothing than to prove that you cannot be grateful for someone's time and effort.

16 8.Different types of thanks letter 1). 感谢帮助 A note of thanks for one’s help 1). 感谢帮助 A note of thanks for one’s help Dear William: Dear William: Thank you very much for your kind letter of October 15, 2008, concerning my project. Thank you very much for your kind letter of October 15, 2008, concerning my project. It was good of you to come to my assistance, and I appreciate your generosity. Your aid will be invaluable in helping me accomplish my objectives. If I can reciprocate at any time, please be sure to call on me. It was good of you to come to my assistance, and I appreciate your generosity. Your aid will be invaluable in helping me accomplish my objectives. If I can reciprocate at any time, please be sure to call on me. Thanks again for your courtesy. Thanks again for your courtesy. Cordially, Cordially, Bear Bear

17 2). 感谢别人的祝贺 A note of thanks for one’s compliment 2). 感谢别人的祝贺 A note of thanks for one’s compliment Dear Miss Allen: Dear Miss Allen: Thanks you very much for your kind letter of April 14, 2008, concerning our service. Thanks you very much for your kind letter of April 14, 2008, concerning our service. It is constantly gratifying to receive a complimentary letter like yours, which indicates that our efforts to serve you are appreciated. You may be sure that our department will receive appropriate recognition for a job well done. It is constantly gratifying to receive a complimentary letter like yours, which indicates that our efforts to serve you are appreciated. You may be sure that our department will receive appropriate recognition for a job well done. Thank you again for your courtesy. Thank you again for your courtesy. Cordially, Cordially, Bear Bear

18 3). 感谢别人的指教 A note of thanks for one’s guidance 3). 感谢别人的指教 A note of thanks for one’s guidance Dear Professor Jackson: Dear Professor Jackson: It is just two months since I consulted with you about choosing my job and I want to assure you that I appreciate your help. It is just two months since I consulted with you about choosing my job and I want to assure you that I appreciate your help. Your advice has been invaluable, and I have followed the course you recommended, with gratifying results. I took the job, and consider it the wisest step I could have taken. Your advice has been invaluable, and I have followed the course you recommended, with gratifying results. I took the job, and consider it the wisest step I could have taken. I would like to express my gratitude, along with my very best wishes. I would like to express my gratitude, along with my very best wishes. Cordially, Cordially, Bear Bear

19 4). 感谢别人的招待并送礼物 A letter of thanks for one’s hospitality and sending a gift 4). 感谢别人的招待并送礼物 A letter of thanks for one’s hospitality and sending a gift Dear Lora: Dear Lora: Please accept my thanks for the very pleasant time I spent on Tuesday evening at your office. Please accept my thanks for the very pleasant time I spent on Tuesday evening at your office. I very much appreciated your hospitality and also thoroughly enjoyed three very interesting colorful films which were shown to us. I very much appreciated your hospitality and also thoroughly enjoyed three very interesting colorful films which were shown to us. Now I would like to express my thanks for your warm hospitality with a little gift that you will shortly receive. Now I would like to express my thanks for your warm hospitality with a little gift that you will shortly receive. Cordially, Cordially, Susan Susan

20 9 、 Practice 9 、 Practice After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a letter of gratitude and include the following details: After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a letter of gratitude and include the following details: 1) Mentioning what happened in the accident; 1) Mentioning what happened in the accident; 2) Telling the person about your recovery; 2) Telling the person about your recovery; 3) Expressing your thanks. 3) Expressing your thanks.

21 Dear John, Dear John, I am writing to thank you for looking after me after that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for your assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious. I am writing to thank you for looking after me after that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for your assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious. The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that Emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome. The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that Emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.

22 Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish and to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach. But you showed by your actions that you are an exception. Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish and to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach. But you showed by your actions that you are an exception. Yours sincerely, Yours sincerely, Li Ming Li Ming

23 Part Two Congratulation 1. Definition 1. Definition 得到亲友、同事、同学等通过考试,荣获 晋升、获得学位、结婚、喜得贵子等好消 息时写的信。 得到亲友、同事、同学等通过考试,荣获 晋升、获得学位、结婚、喜得贵子等好消 息时写的信。

24 2. Principles 2. Principles 1). The purpose of writing the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deserves the special message of recognition and praise. 1). The purpose of writing the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deserves the special message of recognition and praise. 2). The note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only. These messages are most effective when they conduct no business. 2). The note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only. These messages are most effective when they conduct no business.

25 3). The whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational. 3). The whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational. 4). Be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event. Any delay in delivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all. 4). Be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event. Any delay in delivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all.

26 3. Requirements 3. Requirements Timely Timely Faithful Faithful Kind Kind Brief Brief

27 4. Content 4. Content How to receive the news How to receive the news What kind of news What kind of news What kind of feeling on hearing the news What kind of feeling on hearing the news Congratulations Congratulations

28 5. Frame 5. Frame 首段:表达听到喜讯的心情。 主体段落:对喜讯进行积极评价。 结尾段:表达衷心的祝贺之情。 首段:表达听到喜讯的心情。 主体段落:对喜讯进行积极评价。 结尾段:表达衷心的祝贺之情。

29 6. Useful Expression 6. Useful Expression Congratulations, all of us feel proud of Congratulations, all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements! 祝贺你,我们都为您所取得的巨大成就感到骄 傲。 your remarkable achievements! 祝贺你,我们都为您所取得的巨大成就感到骄 傲。 I am so pleased and happy to hear that... 听到 …… 我真的非常高兴。 I am so pleased and happy to hear that... 听到 …… 我真的非常高兴。 I write to congratulate you upon... 我写信来祝贺你 …… 。 I write to congratulate you upon... 我写信来祝贺你 …… 。 I offer you my warmest congratulations on your... 对于你的 …… 我表示热烈的祝贺。 I offer you my warmest congratulations on your... 对于你的 …… 我表示热烈的祝贺。

30 We are just as proud as can be of you and We are just as proud as can be of you and send our congratulations. 我们为你感到由衷的自豪!祝贺你! send our congratulations. 我们为你感到由衷的自豪!祝贺你! I wish you still further success! 预祝你取得更大的成功。 I wish you still further success! 预祝你取得更大的成功。 We look forward to bragging about you in We look forward to bragging about you in the years ahead. 我们希望在未来的岁月中能骄傲地谈起你。 the years ahead. 我们希望在未来的岁月中能骄傲地谈起你。 Please accept our most sincere congratulations Please accept our most sincere congratulationsand very best wishes for all the good future in the world. 谨向你表示祝贺和最良好的祝福。

31 7.Sample 7.Sample Dear Ruth , I offer my warmest congratulations on your Dear Ruth , I offer my warmest congratulations on yourpromotion to Vice President of the company. I know how talented you are and how hard you’ve worked to attain this goal. No one could have worked to attain this goal. No one could have been more deserving. How exciting it must be for you to realize your ambitions after all those you to realize your ambitions after all those years of hard working. It’s been a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded.

32 Sincere congratulations to you. Your expertise and dedication will bring out the best of everyone on your staff. They’re learning from a real professional. I wish you still further success. They’re learning from a real professional. I wish you still further success. Sincerely yours, Sincerely yours, Ma Lin Ma Lin

33 8. Practice 8. Practice Write a letter of about 100 words to congratulate your friend Li Ming, who did well in the passed college entrance exam and has been enrolled in Peking University. Write a letter of about 100 words to congratulate your friend Li Ming, who did well in the passed college entrance exam and has been enrolled in Peking University.

34 Sample Sample Dear Ming, Dear Ming, We are very happy to know that you have successfully passed the college entrance examination this year and have been admitted into Peking University. Allow us to give our most sincere congratulations on this exciting occasion. We are very happy to know that you have successfully passed the college entrance examination this year and have been admitted into Peking University. Allow us to give our most sincere congratulations on this exciting occasion. You have all along been working hard at your professional studies, and you are excellent in most subjects. Your success shows that only hard work can yield good results. You have all along been working hard at your professional studies, and you are excellent in most subjects. Your success shows that only hard work can yield good results.

35 We take this opportunity to express our best wishes to you. Wish you greater achievements in your college education. We take this opportunity to express our best wishes to you. Wish you greater achievements in your college education. Your cordially, Your cordially, Tom Tom


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