Presentation on theme: "“Charles” By Shirley Jackson"— Presentation transcript:
1 “Charles” By Shirley Jackson Laurie’s LetterText-based Writing Prompt
2 Laurie’s Poor School Behavior Graphic OrganizerLaurie’s Poor School Behavior
3 Laurie’s Poor School Behavior Paragraph Topics1- Physical AttacksLaurie’s Poor School Behavior3- Disruptive Behavior2- Verbal Offenses
4 Points within Paragraph 1 1- Hit the teacherPhysical Attacks3- Kicked the teacher’s friend2-Hit a girl on the head and made her bleed; punched a boy in the stomach
5 Points within Paragraph 2 1- Got Fresh (2)3- Cursed 3 timesVerbal Offenses2- Told a girl to say a bad word-twice
6 Points within Paragraph 3 1- Threw ChalkDisruptive Behavior3- Stomped his feet2- Yelled during story hour
7 Full Picture Hit a girl on the head and punched a boy Hit the teacherGot FreshTold girl to say bad word-twiceLaurie’s Poor School BehaviorKicked the teacher’s friendPhysical AttacksVerbal OffensesSaid bad word himselfDisruptive BehaviorThrew ChalkYelled during story hourStomped his feet
8 How do we put it into paragraph form? One sentence at a time.
9 Body Paragraph 1- Class Disruptions (Bun) Topic sentence: (T) Transition:FirstOneOne difficulty your son is having is with class disruptions.
10 Paragraph 1-Point 1Patty 1-(T)OneFirstInitialLaurie’s foot stomping episode was the first infraction.
11 Paragraph 1-Point 1-Detail 1 Detail –no transition (what happened/what was the consequence)The noise was so loud that he was forced to stand in the corner.
12 Body Paragraph 1-Point 2 Patty 2 (T)- Next Then Another Second Throwing chalk across the room was another offense he committed.
13 Body Paragraph 1-Point 2-Detail 2 Detail –no transition (what happened/what was the consequence)As a result of doing this twice, he lost his chalkboard privileges for a time.
14 Body Paragraph 1-Point 3 Patty 3 (T) Third Last Another Then The last disruptive action was Laurie yelling during class.
15 Body Paragraph 1-Point 3-Detail 3 Detail –no transition (what happened/what was the consequence)This unfortunate situation caused your kindergartener to be dismissed from the group, and he wasn’t permitted to participate in the exercises.