Presentation on theme: "Extended Essay в программе IB DP. Extended Essay и портрет студента IB Caring (заботливый) Principled (принципиальный) Open-minded (открытый) Risk-takers."— Presentation transcript:
Extended Essay в программе IB DP
Extended Essay и портрет студента IB Caring (заботливый) Principled (принципиальный) Open-minded (открытый) Risk-takers (решительный) Balanced (уравновешенный) Inquirer (исследователь) Knowledgeable (знающий) Thinker (мыслящий) Communicator (общительный) Reflective (склонный к самопознанию и самооценке)
ЧТО? An in-depth study of a focused topic. It is intended to promote high-level research and writing skills, intellectual discovery and creativity. It leads to a major piece of formally presented, structured writing, in which ideas and findings are communicated in a reasoned and coherent manner, appropriate to the subject chosen. Completion of the written essay is followed by a short, concluding interview, or viva voce with the supervisor and IB Diploma Coordinator.
ПОЧЕМУ? Meeting the requirements of the IB learner profile (central portion of hexagon. Original, independent research. Communication of ideas and information in a logical sequence. Required component of the all IB Diploma candidates. No Extended Essay means NO IB DIPLOMA Required bonus that awards a maximum of 3 points with TOK
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ГДЕ? At home, at school, on vacation, anywhere!
КОГДА? According to internal calendar MES –December 12 DP
Формальные требования Includes: 1. Introduction 2. The Body 3. Conclusion 4. Any quotations Does not ınclude: 1. The abstract 2. The contents page 3. Illustrations 4. Equations, formulas 5. Citations/References 6. Footnotes or endnotes 7. The bibliography The upper limit is 4,000 words Abstract within 300 words which clearly states: 1.The research question being investigated 2.The scope of the investigation 3.The conclusion of the extended essay
КТО? Student Supervisor IB Coordinator IBO
Супервайзер должен… EE must be supervised by a faculty member Help you formulate a well focused research question Encourage and support the student throughout the research and writing of the extended essay To spend 3-5 hours Provide guidance and advice Discuss the choice of topic with the student Read and comment on your draft Ensure proper documentation Ensure that the extended essay is the student’s own work Conduct a short concluding interview (viva voce) with the student Verify authentic work Complete the supervisor’s report Give predicted grades
Супервайзер НЕ должен Get started and tell what to do Give a research question Give the resources Edit the work / check calculations Remind of meeting times and deadlines Chase after student to read rough draft or re-write it.
Какие предметы (subject areas)? Biology Business and Management Chemistry Classical Greek and Latin Computer Science Dance Design Technology Economics Environmental Systems and Society Film Geography History Human Rights Information Technology in a Global Society Mathematics Music Peace and Conflict Studies Philosophy Physics Politics Psychology Social and Cultural Anthropology Theatre Visual Arts World Religions Language Group 1 and 2
Кроме… A self – study language A1 student cannot write an extended essay in his / her language A1 A language A1 essay should only be written by those with that language A1 A language B essay cannot be written by those with that language as their group 1 language. A parent cannot supervise the EE
Что студент должен сделать обязательно? Choose a topic from an approved subject Observe all regulations related to the EE Meet deadlines Acknowledge all sources of information and ideas in an approved academic manner
Что студенту рекомендуется сделать (желательно) Start work early Think very carefully about the research question Plan how, when and where you will find material for your essay Plan a schedule for both researching and writing the essay Record sources as your research progresses Have a clear structure for the essay before beginning to write Check and proofread the final version carefully Make sure all basic requirements are met
Structure of The Extended Essay A Title Page (Clear indication of the focus of the essay) A Contents Page (all pages should be numbered) An Abstract (not exceeding 300 words) An Introduction (response to the research question that will be developed in the body.) A Body (systematic development of a convincing answer to the research question) A Conclusion References /Bibliography Optional: Illustrations, Diagrams, Charts and Appendices.
Top tips: сфокусированный проблемный вопрос Choice of research question – make it clear – make it focused – make it relevant and important
Examples of Bad and Good Research Questions Bad Question: Politically correct language Detergents in the environment Acid-base chemistry Prime Numbers Gravitation Good Question: The reason for the adoption of “politically correct” terms in the USA The effect of detergent toxicity on certain bacterial strains The effects of sugar-free chewing gum on the pH in the mouth after a meal Prime numbers in cryptography Orbital determination of a minor planet
Sample Questions History: To what extent did the Florida teachers’ strike of the 1960’s change the educational and professional climate in that state? Science: To what extent is the Chernobyl nuclear accident still affecting agriculture and public health? Mathematics: Under what conditions does the Newton-Raphson method fail? Politics: To what extent did the US’s involvement in Grenada alter American perception and presidents’ use of the War Powers Act? Art: To what extent is the kimono an art form or merely Japanese traditional costume?
Top tips: выбор темы Сhoice of topic is everything – do something you are genuinely interested in
Top tips: источники The best essays have a range of sources – newspapers, journals, interviews, books etc. Primary and secondary sources in balance
Top tips: ссылки на источники Ссылки на источники
Working habits and tips Keep your sources at a distance Talk to your sources – don’t let them dictate to you Remember that they are not absolute truths – you should evaluate them not let them control you Photocopy the title page of every book you borrow from the library This will save you valuable time later on – you will need the full title, place and date of publication later on. Start building the bibliography right away Time saving! Once you quote someone put in a reference right away This way you won’t have to look for the source later on And remember... use footnotes!
Top tips: соблюдение сроков
Top tips: советы супервайзера Talk to your supervisor – don’t run away from them when the deadline’s approaching. They will find you!
Top tips: советы родителей Get your parents involved. It helps to have their experience and support and the occasional nag session
Критерии оценивания A. Research question (0-2) B. Introduction (0-2) C. Investigation (0-4 D. Knowledge and understanding of the topic studied (0-4) E. Reasoned argument (0-4) F. Application of analytic and evaluative skills (0-4) G. Use of language appropriate to the subject (0-4) H. Conclusion (0-2) I. Formal pesentation (0-4) J. Abstract (0-2) K. Holistic judgement (0-4) TOTAL: 36 points
Оценивание Internal - EE grade to be indicated as predicted grades External - EE graded and moderated against general criteria..\Marking_2009\EE 2009.doc
Plagiarism - submitting thoughts, ideas and writing of another person as your own. Collusion - knowingly allowing your work to be used by others or having someone else write it for you. Malpractice
Extended Essay in History
Bad Questions and Topics How did the Versailles treaty affect world history? too... ? How was Jónas frá Hriflu dressed at his funeral? too... ? Who was Adolf Hitler and what was he like? too... ? Why was Joseph Stalin so cruel? too... ? Would Germany have gone to war without Hitler? too... ? Governmental phone taps in 1990s Iceland: extent and purpose. too... ?
The Research Question Is it suitable? Can it be asked and answered? Is it worthwhile to answer? Dangerous research questions: Those that are too wide. Those that are “obivous.” Those that you can not answer due to lack of sources available to you. Those that are too narrow. Those that are subjective. Those that are purely hypothetical (pseudo history)
Forms of Research Don’t restrict yourself to a narrative! The point of a research essay is not simply to tell a story – regardless of whether it has a happy ending or not. Comparitive essay Compare and contrast examples A and B with regards to question X. Bibliographical essay What has the historiagraphical development been like in a certain narrow topic.
Title Page (APA) APA format requires a Title Page – and so does the IB EE. Click here for an actual, more detailed example: APA Title Page.APA Title Page
Contents Page (APA) C omes after the Abstract and lists all the pages : - Title page - Abstract - Essay (naming sections if appropriate) - Works Cited - Appendices, if any Click to see real example.real example
References (APA) List only those sources you quote from or summarize or refer to in your essay. Here is a real example with more instructions: APA References. Another explanatory example from a web site: APA References APA References
Abstract (APA) Maximum 300 words. Write your Abstract after you’ve finished your paper. Don’t count these words in your total word count. Page number will be “2” with a few words of the title in front of it.
Parenthetical (in text) citations (APA) Author mentioned in sentence …as Shelton (2006) stated (p. 12). Author’s name not given in sentence …is strongly argued (Shelton, 2003, p. 102). Two authors say the same thing …generally agreed (Shelton, 2006; Bell, 2007). No author’s name is in the citation …evidence is abundant (“Traffic,” 2007, p. 4).
Parenthetical (in text) citations (APA) In the text of your essay, when you refer to sources listed on your Works Cited page, follow these guidelines: Diana Hacker guide OWL at Purdue (APA)
Title Page (MLA) MLA formatting does not ask for a separate Title Page but IB requires one for the EE, so do it this way. Click here for an actual, more detailed example: Title Page.Title Page
Contents Page (MLA) comes after the Abstract and lists all the pages : - Title page - Abstract - Essay (naming sections if appropriate) - Works Cited - Appendices, if any Click to see real example.real example
Abstract (MLA) Maximum 300 words. Write your Abstract after you’ve finished your paper. Don’t count these words in your total word count ( max. 4000) Page number will be “ii” with your last name in front of it.
Works Cited (MLA) List only those sources you quote from or summarize or refer to in the essay. Here is a real example with more instructions: Works Cited. Another example from a web site: MLA Works Cited Works CitedMLA Works Cited
Parenthetical (in text) citations (MLA) Some quick examples Author mentioned in sentence …as Shelton stated (102). Name not given in sentence …it is strongly argued (Shelton 102)… Two authors say the same thing …generally agreed (Shelton 11; Bell 98) No author’s name is in the citation …this evidence is abundant (“Traffic” 4).
Parenthetical (in text) citations (MLA) In the text of your essay, when you refer to sources listed on your Works Cited page, follow these guidelines : Diana Hacker guide OWL at Purdue
Overall Assessment A Excellent performance B Good Performance C Satisfactory performance D 9-16 Mediocre performance E 0-8 Elementary performance