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1How to write concisely and compellingly Recipe for Writing:How to write concisely and compellingly
2A recipe has a process: Prewriting Drafting: knowing how to: Follow your recipe.Have your ingredients on hand.Editing: checking it overSharing: let a friend help youproofread BEFORE the teacher sees it.
3Visualize the end product: Generate ideasEffective pre-writing with graphic organizers!Save time and energyAvoid brain-fryHelp to keep on taskGet creative juices flowing
4Graphic organizers: How they help Stop worrying about producing “perfect” English.Organize vocabulary: write a list of words to use.Increase fluency.Stay on task.Know what you are going to write about before you write it.Packets of graph. org.s
5Examples of Graphic Organizers Story mapsFlow chartsMind mapsVenn diagramsQuestion List MatrixPlay matching game
6Essay StructureIntroductionParagraph oneParagraph twoParagraph threeConclusion, with a twist
7Proper Essay Structure 1 Intro: Tell them what you are going to say.2 Body: Tell them details, in three paragraphs.3. Conclusion: Tell them what you told them.
8Tell them what you are going to say. IntroductionTell them what you are going to say.Have an attention grabbing sentence, or hook, to get the reader interested.List the general points you will discuss inthe body. This is the thesis sentence.
9Example of an introduction hook Imagine a country where small gardens are maintained in the subway station. Imagine ancient customs and the most modern conveniences existing side by side in harmony. With its mountains, varying climate, and spectacular urbanscapes, Japan offers many unique experiences for the Western tourist.
10Example of thesis statement Imagine a country where small gardens are maintained in the subway station. Imagine ancient customs and the most modern conveniences existing side by side in harmony. With its mountains, varying climate, and spectacular urbanscapes, Japan offers many unique experiences for the Western tourist.
11BodyThree points, ideas or experiences related to your main topic contained in 3 paragraphs.Each paragraph explains in detail one idea. The idea is in the topic sentence.Helps you stay on taskInterest for the reader
12Example of a topic sentence Japan is a small country with a great variety of geographical features. It has four main islands and more than 6,800 smaller islands. The total land area of Japan is 377,719 square kilometers. Seventy-three percent of this land is mountainous. The tallest mountain is Mt. Fuji, which is 3,776 meters high.
13ConclusionThe last sentence in your intro becomes the first sentence in your conclusion paragraph.Next: state your three ideas or points again.Finally, wrap it up with a thought.
14ConclusionFrom spectacular Mount Fuji to modern bustling Tokyo, the Western tourist can find many fascinating places to visit in Japan. Hotel prices have never been more accessible. Visiting Japan should be on the top of everyone’s “want-to-tour” list.
15By following this guideline, your essays will be Follow the recipeBy following this guideline, your essays will beFocusedWell-writtenLess time-consuming to writeMore concise and to the point.Good luck!