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1 You’ll need: Notebook paper pencil
Showing… not Telling You’ll need: Notebook paper pencil

2 Instead of Telling: “The girls were excited.”
Show Your Reader: “Giggles and screams filled the arena. The soft curls were now damp with perspiration and the anticipation of the event. They held tight to each other in a mock effort to contain themselves. Arms flailed upward, and voices echoed in varying tones. The moment was here.” Which parts SHOWED you something?

3 Instead of Telling: “The room was vacant.”
Show Your Reader: “The door opened with a resounding echo that seemed to fill the house. Cob webs once attached flowed freely in the air as the open door brought light to a well-worn floor. The light gave notice to the peeling paint on the walls and to the silhouettes once covered by pictures. The new air gave life to a stuffiness that entrapped the room. Faded and torn white sheets covered once new furniture now drowning in dust.” Which parts SHOWED you something?

4 Instead of Telling: “The pizza was delicious.”
Show Your Reader: “Steam rising up off the melted cheese made my mouth water. The first bite, my teeth sinking into the cheese through the tomato sauce and into the moist crust, made me chew and swallow rapidly. Even the cheese and tomato sauce, sticking to my fingertips, begged to be licked.” Which parts SHOWED you something?

5 Instead of Telling: “He is angry.”
Show Your Reader: “Sitting at his desk, his jaw tightened. His eyes flashed heat waves at me. The words erupted from his mouth, "I want to talk to you after class." The final hiss in his voice warned me about his feelings.” Which parts SHOWED you something?

6 Instead of Telling: “The morning was beautiful.”
Show Your Reader: “Behind the mountains, the sun peaked brightly, ready to start a new day. The blue sky remained silent yet showed signs of sadness. The wind whispered through the trees as the cheerful sun rose. The birds sang gently by my window as if they wanted to wake me up.” Which parts SHOWED you something?

7 Instead of Telling: “The coffee was enjoyable.”
Show Your Reader: “She cradled the mug in both hands and leaned her head over it in the rising steam. Pursing her lips, she blew softly over the clouded surface and let her eyelids drop. Her shoulders rose slightly as she breathed in, and she hummed with her head low. I lifted the tiny porcelain pitcher and poured a brief rotating arch of white into the black depths of my own cup. She opened her eyes, and we looked at each other across the table without speaking.” Which parts SHOWED you something?

8 Instead of Telling: “The black cat scared me.”
Let’s do this in groups. 5 minutes 1 paragraph Time to share Turn them in!

9 Choose one telling sentence from below and expand to a showing paragraph or other short genre of writing. INDEPENDENT WORK – Each person writes their own. Joey was nervous. I was late to class. The angry dog bit me. Her lunch was good. Turn these in at the end of class.

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