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1 Saniyah: You finished it with all the correct vocab Saniyah but you didn’t read any of the corrections which I wrote for you. You need to think about improving as well as finishing. Lots of good vocab – banana milkshake = batido de plátano. 11/20http://animoto.com/play/3YmEDZmTvXmUNw0Swo4x4A Safiyyah: Some accents missing on está and aquí + you haven’t written juice or grill correctly like we learnt in class. You always get about the same grade Safiyyah, your work is quite good but you aren’t correcting what was wrong. 10/20http://animoto.com/play/1j6JStw0BUQJiy0fNu2IGQ Aminah: Spelling of ‘my’ wrong (mi) + address I spelt ‘dirección’ You’re not paying attention to words that look like English. Generally though a very good effort, please try to use whole sentences more – you’re sometimes not writing the whole thing. 15/20http://animoto.com/play/OCodK45f5GELosYQK21Y6Q Zoya: Spelling of veg and welcome wrong + a few sentences with bits missing but generally v good. Love music – v appropriate and the bit about ice creams is excellent. 16/20http://animoto.com/play/XPH11yR9sfLH7oyuyo52sg Madiya: Lots of little extra things that were great and I liked the food you chose. Main problem is missing parts of sentence ‘vamos a comer’ NOT vamos comer* + dirección = address 15/20http://animoto.com/play/usaRhGJzExf8KxYJ23fohA Raheesa: Spelling of England wrong but a great start. You haven’t read my comments so garlic bread still wrong + you have missed some whole sentences. Good but not great!! 15/20http://animoto.com/play/JhW82txU242npzAESKH4Fw Tayyibah: You won’t improve without reading the comments I write Tayyibah– adjectives in wrong place and many spellings wrong! Task completed but very inaccurate. 8/20http://animoto.com/play/S4eZOQNjrN2inHrqXGOXuQ Sana: Well done for completing video – you didn’t correct all mistakes I gave you so a lot of adjectives still in wrong place. It’s a shame Sana because this work a good piece of work. You just need to spend a little more time reflecting on your work. 12/20http://animoto.com/play/3nsDYeyyLBcwlKJEcoGFZQ Atheeqa: This is almost brilliant Atheeqa – just missed time and address and a couple of little mistakes with whole sentences. Overall really well done but finish the whole task 15/20http://animoto.com/play/vHsVFVZ611Euz09NIP1FJg Naila: Incomplete so can’t get higher grade. I expect better from you. You’re missing pudding and drinks Naila. Get organised to do your homework. 6/20http://animoto.com/play/ucP6SLz5vhNZjP8ob9Za2A Hafzah: Not corrected for homework so can’t score higher grades. Some spelling mistakes and adjectives in wrong place – a la parrilla needs to go after noun. 5/20http://animoto.com/play/tYDmA1s1wBk8o9hcEuWy1A Luthfa: Missing address and time but your corrections were good. I want you to organise yourself to read what I wrote so you can correct all mistakes AND finish it. 11/20http://animoto.com/play/6Jd3WquFSGFHfCPlpUFztA Khateeja: Not corrected for homework so can’t score higher grades and only starter completed. Good food vocab with machacadas in correct place. 5/20http://animoto.com/play/HFirLAYlfu1qocJmGJbmEQ

2 Zara: Couple of things missing Zara (address and time) but a good effort considering you weren’t in lesson. Try to add a few more bits – your work has 0 mistakes!! 14/20http://animoto.com/play/BS560njX2gihKj8j3XX5dQ Amina: Accents missing at start & spellings wrong (Inglaterra/mixta) Try to check these before putting them in – Otherwise everything completed and most things done very well. 13/20http://animoto.com/play/AT2zPL6oFxZevqPPfbNFzQ Madeeha: The main problem Madeeha is that you haven’t looked at the corrections I gave you. If you do your homework early please check back for my corrections. A shame because it’s a good video 12/20http://animoto.com/play/00s0zOygVHFXD5v9hWPYRQ Zenam: Incomplete Zenam! No pudding or 2 nd course + mistakes not looked at. Very little effort made on this homework. 6/20http://animoto.com/play/4c1zl7NCXP9sU8AwwrE2bA Talia: You didn’t read my comments so all the mistakes you made were still there. You finished everything so task completed and well written but details letting you down. 13/20http://animoto.com/play/3Wu6A4dnTAQ4EEX3hv1y9Q Somayya: I really like this: lots of good stuff. I like the added description of cake and house and everything there. A fantastic homework (hasta pronto means ‘see you soon’. 19/20http://animoto.com/play/e7xJep00eEVCGA4zLpCx4QI Iqrah: It’s a great effort – I wish you hadn’t used translation sites for last bit and concentrated on giving time and address. Apart from this I’m really pleased with effort – keep it up 16/20http://animoto.com/play/Xj20kaMStlLRdL0QeWgRpg Aaliyah B A better homework Aaliyah because you bothered to correct it – keep doing this! Patatas asadas (make it rhyme/agree) No time or address or drinks in Spanish 13/20http://animoto.com/play/Kj9fdDZzzhbvKK3Gy4Lfzw Alia: Generally good Alia – you don’t give an address + some of your sentences are not correctly written ‘vamos a comer’ = we’re going to eat. I like the 1 st 2 nd course – well written without errors. 12/20http://animoto.com/play/QDj0Fo0NRKZnimv76yoWOw Kiran H: Fantastic effort Kiran, your homework definitely improving and your Spanish here is great. Few sp mistakes (segundo = 2 nd ) Excellent ending too – v well written. 17/20http://animoto.com/play/1Qo2vpiomXCxNjTxDaB3OA Kiran Q: You’re missing drinks and pudding Kiran so you can’t get a higher grade. Try to aim to finish your task as much as possible in lesson and then correct for homework. 5/20http://animoto.com/play/LyOVRzxTWaxMKT154rhGeA Aisha: Some errors in sentences – ensalada is 1 word + patatas caseras (needs to agree!!!) Missing address and time. A good effort considering your computer’s rubbishness. 14/20http://animoto.com/play/R3rsmXLQg5YwITnqtaHx7A Anisa: Not corrected for homework so can’t score higher grades. Your video isn’t checked as everything is the wrong way round. An improvement needed 2/20http://animoto.com/play/folq5LQvS42wXeVukcc1jw Zahra: Accents missing on está and aquí. Lots of spelling mistakes that you could easily have found by looking at comments. A good ending and task completed but could be better 12/20http://animoto.com/play/cKhqqXEDDLDY2gpEOKGrqQ


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