Presentation on theme: "HWL: 9/18/12 -Voice Lesson Packets (Diction, Detail, Imagery, Syntax, and Tone) * Review Detail Definition J.E. #11: Detail The dog stood up and growled."— Presentation transcript:
HWL: 9/18/12 -Voice Lesson Packets (Diction, Detail, Imagery, Syntax, and Tone) * Review Detail Definition J.E. #11: Detail The dog stood up and growled like a lion, stiff-standing hackles, teeth uncovered as he lashed up his fury for the charge. Tea Cake split the water like an otter, opening his knife as he dived. The dog raced down the back-bone of the cow to the attack and Janie screamed and slipped far back on the tail of the cow, just out of reach of the dog’s angry paws. -Zora Neale Hurston, Their Eyes Were Watching God 1.Which details reveal that the dog has rabies? What effect do these details have on the reader? 2.Contrast the details used to describe Tea Cake (the male protagonist) and Janie (the female protagonist). What do these details reveal about the author’s attitude toward these two characters? 3.Find a passage from TFA(incl. p. #) and extend this passage with more DETAIL. 4.Write YOUR BEST example of detail from your character sketch or extended metaphor.
NO EATING IN THE CLASSROOM…A MAELSTROM OF ANTS INVIDIOUSLY, OVERTLY AND SACRILIGIOUSLY BLANKETED MY DESK THIS MORNING!! -Think-Pair-Share on Claim/Evidence: Pre-write and Intro. -Character Sketch conferences
TFA: IRB (Completed Prior to Wednesday’s Mtg) -Annotate as you read -4 IRB responses (ensure that you refer to the IRB Policy hdt) -Role Assignment work (e.g.: Discussion Director brings in 5 thought-provoking and open-ended questions)
2 nd per. Mini-Conferences: Draft 2 Character Sketch TuesdayWednes.Thurs. KaitlynsaraNadia fiyinkyarahaley AndersonShehrishxavier johnkyaally jasonPeytonadrian meeraellieKaterina William Kim James Leonard Casey Evan Liz
Homework: 9/17/12 -Wednes., Sept. 19: Lit. Circle Responsibilities and IRB entries -Thurs., Sept. 20: Publish-Ready Step: Typed Character Sketch or Typed Extended Metaphor -Thurs., Sept. 20: SP Proposal due (staple rubric on top) and Mtg. in Auditorium for Proc. Poster discussion -Fri., Sept. 21: Claim/evidence Essay on most significant event that has impacted our society since your birth: Pre-write and Draft 1 (don’t forget to include Vocab. 1 & 2 words) Mon., Sept. 24: Grade Recovery for Resumes - Make all necessary improvements - Staple the committee-evaluated rubric and resume to back of revised - Due Mon., Sept. 24 -Thurs., Sept. 27: Publish-Ready: Character Sketch or Extended Metaphor (typed hard copy due (MLA format) and turnitin.com submission deadline) Mon., Sept. 17: Deadline for Mandatory sign up to use www.edmodo.comwww.edmodo.com 2 nd per. Code: xpuqfz
Senior Project Timeline: Fall 2012 August 17 Meeting in Auditorium Overview and Expectations of Semester Project presented. Mentor Approval Process and Application discussed. Students will have 4 weeks to submit the mentor approval form August 20 **Due Date for Consequences Form August 24 Meeting in Auditorium Overview and Expectations of Student Resume presented. Students will have 2 weeks to submit resume to committee. August 30 Meeting in Auditorium Overview and Expectations of Student Proposal presented. Students will have 4 weeks to submit proposal to committee. September 6 **Due Date for Resume September 13 **Due Date for Mentor Approval Form September 20 Meeting in Auditorium Overview and Expectations of Proclamation Posters presented. Students will have 2 weeks to submit to committee September 20 **Due Date for Proposal September 27 Meeting in Auditorium Overview and Expectations of the Senior Project Portfolio which will be a culmination of all the work for the semester and will be presented in the Board Rooms Senior Project Night October TBD **Due Date for Research Paper (exact date to be determined by English Teacher) October 4 **Due Date for Proclamation Poster October 11 Meeting in Auditorium Overview and Expectations of Letter to the Judges presented. Students will have 2 weeks to submit to committee. October 25 Meeting in Auditorium Overview and Expectations of Formal Presentation of the senior project for Board Night presented. Students will have 2.5 weeks to prepare and practice. October 25 **Due Date for Letter to Judges November 1 **Due Date for Mentor Hours Log & Mentor Verification & Evaluation (must be faxed by Mentor) November 8 **Due Date for Portfolio November 9 Meeting in the Auditorium Last minute tips and instructions for Senior Project Night November 15 Senior Project Night