2Warm Up #35 February 1-A Day 2-B Day I believe that feburary is the best month for sending the ones you love gifts and to give cards to new friends and go out to eat at romantic restuarantsWarm Up #35 February 1-A Day 2-B Day
3February is the best month for sending the ones you love gifts, giving cards to new friends, and going to romantic restaurants.Corrected
4Use Your Strong and Authoritative Voice I believeI thinkIt can be seen thatOne can assume thatIn my opinionThe reader may consider thatUse Your Strong and Authoritative Voice
5Bad vs. BadlyBadly is an adverb used to describe how something is done. Bad is an adjective that refers to health or feelings. Bad is also used to complete linking verbs, such as seem, look, taste, and smell.Fill in the blanks with bad or badly:1. I feel ______ that Harriet wasn’t invited.2. Rudolph dances ____, but at least he tried hard.3. The soup tasted ____ on the first day and even worse on the second.4. You look really _____. When was the last time you slept?5. Ms. Kramer spells _____, so it’s lucky she has a smart secretary.6. Roger wanted to see Gisele so _____ that he postponed his flight.
6Warm Up # 36 February 3rd-A Day 6th- B Day this year I have began to really think of my options in depth and take in account what I would be gaining or losing if I did or didnt do somethingWarm Up # 36 February 3rd-A Day 6th- B Day
7Eliminate wordiness and weak, filler words this year I have began (un) toreally think of my options in depth and take in account what I would be gaining or losing if I did or didn’t do something.Eliminate wordiness and weak, filler words
8This year I have begun to think of my options This year I have begun to think of my options. Or: This year I have begun to think of my college options.Revised
9Warm Up # 37 February 7th-A Day 8th B Day costa rica, one of the few countries in the world that doesn’t have no army, educates it’s population good the central american country has a 93 percent literacy rateWarm Up # 37 February 7th-A Day 8th B Day
10Costa Rica--one of the few countries in the world that doesn’t have an army--educates its population well; the Central American country has a ninety-three percent literacy rate.Revised
11Warm Up # 38 February 9th B or 10th A 2/3 of all adult Americans wears corrective lenses. Because of nearsightedness if they have farsightedness or an astigmatism.Warm Up # 38 February 9th B or 10th A
12Two-thirds of all adult Americans wear corrective lenses because of nearsightedness, farsightedness, or astigmatism.Better
13Warm Up # 39Perhaps the more finicky eater in the world is the beloved koala bear of Australia, whom won’t eat nothing accept eucalyptus leafs.February 13th A Day or February 14th B Day
14The beloved Australian koala bear--who won’t eat anything except eucalyptus leaves--is perhaps the most finicky eater in the world.Better
15Warm Up #40 February 15th A Day 16th B Day Would you borrow me your notes from that Social Studies lecture on the bill of rights, which I should of listened to more careful?Warm Up #40 February 15th A Day 16th B Day
16Would you lend me your notes from that social studies lecture on the Bill of Rights, which I should have listened to more carefully.Revised
17Warm Up #41 February 17th/21st in the dead sea located between israel and Jordan a human body cannot remain submerged for long because it is 25 % saltWarm Up #41 February 17th/21st
18In the Dead Sea, located between Israel and Jordan, a human body cannot remain submerged for long because the Dead Sea is twenty-five percent salt.Corrected
19Warm Up #42 February 22nd/23rd walking to a table in the fords fish shack the large lime green hat she was wearing made the woman stand outWarm Up #42 February 22nd/23rd
20Walking to a table in Ford’s Fish Shack, the woman wearing the large lime-green hat stood out. (was hard to miss.)--betterCorrected
21Upon entering the doctor's office, a skeleton caught my attention. I was late for the school bus again. Running for the bus, my book fell in the mud.(Was the book running for the school bus? It's the only nearby noun beside mud.)Deciding to join the navy, the recruiter enthusiastically pumped Joe's hand.(Was the recruiter deciding to join the navy? The only other option is Joe's hand.)Upon entering the doctor's office, a skeleton caught my attention.(Was the skeleton entering the doctor's office? The only other option is my attention.)
22Warm Up #43 February 24th/27th i like the coat that sarah bought at kohls department store with the reversible liningWarm Up #43 February 24th/27th
23I like the coat with the reversible lining that Sarah bought at Kohl's Department Store. Corrected
24Warm Up #44 February 28th/29th Out of those two girls i think that judy is the most reliable remarked adam as he set downWarm Up #44 February 28th/29th
25"Of those two girls, I think that Judy is the more reliable," remarked Adam as he sat down. Corrected
26(notice anything about the longer words …???) Comparative (comparing)---more (than the other)Superlative (assessing as to the best)---most (of all)Big bigger biggestJolly jollier jolliestSweet sweeter sweetestExpensive more expensive most expensiveDelicious more delicious most delicious(notice anything about the longer words …???)
27there were 64 students who obtained permission to see the movie macbeth at wolve trap theatre Warm Up #44 March 1/2
28Sixty-four students obtained permission to see the movie Macbeth at Wolf Trapp Theater. Corrected
292 cars collided at the corner of route seven and claiborne parkway there drivers become involved in a arguementWarm Up#45 March 5/6
30Two cars collided at the corner of Route 7 and Claiborne Parkway; their drivers became involved in an argument.Revised
31an editorial in the christian science monitor criticizing senator’s bensons position on tax return Warm Up # 46 March 7/8
32An editorial in the Christian Science Monitor criticized Sen An editorial in the Christian Science Monitor criticized Sen. Benson's position on tax return.Corrected
33she has wrote a novel entitled mysterious manor and sold a painting named remembrances
34Corrected: She has written a novel entitled Mysterious Manor and sold a painting named Remembrances.
35i and my brother have chose to do the following start shopping for gifts mail our cards early and plan to parties
36Corrected: My brother and I have chosen to do the following: start shopping for gifts, mailing our cards early, and planning two parties.
37they want to lay on the floor and watch in the middle this program will be on television at nine p.m. in the evening
38Corrected: They want to lie on the floor and watch In the Middle on television at 9:00P.M.
39we went to sues house which is located on forty sixth avenue for the april first party
40Corrected: We went to Sue's house on Forty-sixth Avenue for the April 1st party.
41although this list is different than yours we wont have no problem checking off them names
42Corrected: Although this list is different from yours, we won't have a problem checking off those names.
43although this list is different than yours we wont have no problem checking off them names
44Corrected: Although this list is different from yours, we won't have a problem checking off those names.
45crossing East on andrews blvd a late model buick almost hit will and leah
46Crossing east on Andrews Blvd Crossing east on Andrews Blvd., a late-model Ford almost hit Will and Leah.Corrected: