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1 Run On Sentences To use with The Cay

2 A run-on sentence is two or more sentences that are incorrectly written as one sentence. The length of the sentence has nothing to do with it being a run-on sentence. Run-on sentences may be more than one sentence written as one without end marks, OR a run-on may be more than one sentence joined with commas.

3 McGraw Hill – Run-On Sentences Two Cowboys by a Campfire ource/10_runOn.swf ource/10_runOn.swf ource/10_runOn.swf

4 Run-on Examples Timothy believes that Stew Cat is a jumbi he is convinced that there is an evil spirit in Stew Cat an evil spirit in Stew Cat that is causing them bad luck. that is causing them bad luck.

5 Run-on Examples Carnival is one of the most exciting festivals in South America, Carnival begins the Carnival begins the Saturday before Lent Saturday before Lent and lasts until the and lasts until the following Tuesday. following Tuesday.

6 Run-on Examples During this four day celebration in late February or early March many activities take place, they include parades, music, dancing, fireworks, masquerades, and theme parties.

7 Run-on Examples The theme is from a part of history or culture like the Portuguese navigators who discovered Brazil or the Indians of the Amazon region the theme is shown through floats, costumes, and songs.

8 There are four methods for correcting run-on sentences. There are four methods for correcting run-on sentences.

9 1. The first is to simply make two sentences.

10 Incorrect Timothy insists that Phillip help with the weaving even though he is blind he does this so Phillip won't give up on life and become completely dependent on Timothy. Correct Timothy insists that Phillip help with the weaving even though he is blind. He does this so Phillip won't give up on life and become completely dependent on Timothy.

11 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. A chimpanzee walked along the wall.

12 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. A chimpanzee walked along the wall. sentence

13 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. A policeman searched a shed and went into the house he checked the back porch and then left in his car. A policeman searched a shed and went into the house he checked the back porch and then left in his car.

14 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. A policeman searched a shed and went into the house. He checked the back porch and then left in his car. A policeman searched a shed and went into the house. He checked the back porch and then left in his car.run-on

15 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. She peeked into the box, she began to laugh. She peeked into the box, she began to laugh.

16 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. She peeked into the box. She began to laugh. She peeked into the box. She began to laugh.run-on

17 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. Stay with me. Stay with me.

18 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. Stay with me. Stay with me.sentence

19 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. The movie director began to speak everyone looked restless and began to look around and smile at each other and not listen. The movie director began to speak everyone looked restless and began to look around and smile at each other and not listen.

20 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. The movie director began to speak. Everyone looked restless and began to look around and smile at each other and not listen. The movie director began to speak. Everyone looked restless and began to look around and smile at each other and not listen.run-on

21 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. He sits in the park daily. He sits in the park daily.

22 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. He sits in the park daily. He sits in the park daily.sentence

23 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. The alarm rang at six he didn’t rise until nine o’clock. The alarm rang at six he didn’t rise until nine o’clock.

24 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. The alarm rang at six. He didn’t rise until nine o’clock. The alarm rang at six. He didn’t rise until nine o’clock.run-on

25 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. The American flag is passing, we need to stand. The American flag is passing, we need to stand.

26 Is this a sentence or a run-on? Correct run-on sentences by making two sentences. The American flag is passing. We need to stand. The American flag is passing. We need to stand.run-on

27 Practice Complete worksheet in packet named Lesson 10 “Writing Effective Sentences” page

28 Graphic Organizer Create a graphic organizer with the three types of conjunctions. Create a graphic organizer with the three types of conjunctions. Watch BrainPop on Conjunctions /conjunctions/ Watch BrainPop on Conjunctions /conjunctions/ /conjunctions/ /conjunctions/

29 2. The second method for correcting run-on sentences is linking the sentences with a conjunction. (The seven coordinating conjunctions are easy to remember by using this mnemonic device: FANBOYS: For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, and So.)

30 Incorrect Sharks live in all seas. One kind even lives in the Arctic Ocean most live in mild or warm oceans. Correct Sharks live in all seas. One kind even lives in the Arctic Ocean, but most live in mild or warm oceans.

31 Practice In your packet find the worksheet named “Conjunctions” from abcteach.com.

32 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. They planted a garden it didn’t do well due to heavy rainfall.

33 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. They planted a garden, and it didn’t do well due to heavy rainfall. run-on

34 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. One presenter arrived at her seminar late.

35 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. One presenter arrived at her seminar late. sentence

36 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. Phoenix, Arizona is a pretty city it is one of the fastest growing cities in the country.

37 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. Phoenix, Arizona is a pretty city, and it is one of the fastest growing cities in the country. run-on

38 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. You may place a stamp on your envelope you may place the envelope in this basket for stamping.

39 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. You may place a stamp on your envelope, or you may place the envelope in this basket for stamping. You may place a stamp on your envelope, or you may place the envelope in this basket for stamping.run-on

40 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. Our governor will not run next term. Our governor will not run next term.

41 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. Our governor will not run next term. Our governor will not run next term.sentence

42 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. Mary Poppins was a popular movie in 1964 it is still popular today. Mary Poppins was a popular movie in 1964 it is still popular today.

43 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a coordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma before the conjunction. Mary Poppins was a popular movie in 1964, and it is still popular today. Mary Poppins was a popular movie in 1964, and it is still popular today.run-on

44 Graphic Organizer Create a graphic organizer to remember the coordinating conjunctions. Create a graphic organizer to remember the coordinating conjunctions.

45 Practice Complete worksheet Writing Effective Sentences pages

46 3. The third method for correcting run-on sentences is joining the two short related sentences with a semicolon. Use a semicolon to join sentences when the ideas are closely connected and need no transition word to explain the connection between them. The semicolon, as used here, is the grammatical equivalent of a period.

47 Incorrect The booby likes to eat fish, so they live near the coast they are excellent divers. Correct The booby likes to eat fish, so they live near the coast; they are excellent divers.

48 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. I like chocolate ice cream Peter loves to eat chocolate cake.

49 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. I like chocolate ice cream; Peter loves to eat chocolate cake. run-on

50 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. We were grocery shopping.

51 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. We were grocery shopping. sentence

52 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. Her blonde hair turned green from the chlorine in the pool.

53 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. Her blonde hair turned green from the chlorine in the pool. sentence

54 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. Snow drifted on the roads the car couldn’t get through it.

55 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. Snow drifted on the roads; the car couldn’t get through it. run-on

56 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. The price is right I must buy it.

57 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. The price is right; I must buy it. run-on

58 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. His cell phone is dead I can’t call him.

59 Correct the run-on sentences by adding a semicolon. His cell phone is dead; I can’t call him. run-on

60 BrainPop Semicolons /semicolons/ /semicolons/ /semicolons/ Run-On Sentences /runonsentences/ /runonsentences/ /runonsentences/

61 Worksheet

62 4. The fourth method for correcting run-on sentences is by making one of the clauses dependent by adding a subordinating conjunction.

63 Subordinating Conjunctions afterbecausethatwhere althoughbeforethoughtwherever aseven thoughunlesswhich as ififuntilwhile as long asoncewhatwho as soon assincewhateverhowever as thoughso thatwhenever

64 Notebook Glue list of subordinating conjunctions into notebooks.

65 Incorrect Fish are attracted to coral reefs they are a good place for shelter and there is a large source of food available. Correct Fish are attracted to coral reefs, because they are a good place for shelter and there is a large source of food available. Correct Fish are attracted to coral reefs, because they are a good place for shelter and there is a large source of food available.

66 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. You give your speech go over the key points.

67 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. Before you give your speech, go over the key points. Before you give your speech, go over the key points.run-on

68 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. The club held a fundraiser they gave the money to charity. The club held a fundraiser they gave the money to charity.

69 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. After the club held a fundraiser, they gave the money to charity. After the club held a fundraiser, they gave the money to charity.run-on

70 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. The boss arrives a morning meeting is held. The boss arrives a morning meeting is held.

71 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. Whenever the boss arrives, a morning meeting is held. Whenever the boss arrives, a morning meeting is held.run-on

72 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. He will have to walk to karate lessons. He will have to walk to karate lessons.

73 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. He will have to walk to karate lessons. He will have to walk to karate lessons.sentences

74 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. It rains tomorrow I won’t wash my windows. It rains tomorrow I won’t wash my windows.

75 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. If it rains tomorrow, I won’t wash my windows. If it rains tomorrow, I won’t wash my windows.

76 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. A hair stylist cut her hair her friend did her nails. A hair stylist cut her hair her friend did her nails.

77 Correct each run-on sentence by adding a subordinating conjunction. Don’t forget to add a comma after the subordinate clause. While a hair stylist cut, her hair her friend did her nails. While a hair stylist cut, her hair her friend did her nails.

78 BrainPop Clauses auses/ auses/

79 Practice Writing Effective Sentences Pages

80 Correct the Run-on Sentences Repairing Run-On Sentences /quizzes/runons_quiz.htm /quizzes/runons_quiz.htm /quizzes/runons_quiz.htm

81 BBC - Skillswise Level 2 Quiz - Ten question quiz where you choose the best coordinating or subordinating (because) conjunction. erestsentences/compoundsentences/quiz.shtml erestsentences/compoundsentences/quiz.shtml Level 3 Quiz - Ten question quiz practices mostly with subordinating conjunctions. (Caution – Commas are not used with coordinating conjunctions with these quizzes.)


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