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Intro paragraph Answers the question: What will I find out when I read this paper ?
Answers the question: What will I find out when I read this paragraph ?
Winning Qualities of BOTH Clearly states the biggest idea Confident Precise / persuasive / vivid word choice Fluent (flows smoothly)
Count how many ways T.S. 2 BEATS T.S. 1 1.Aluminum isnt as good for cost or its ability to last a long time, so people should buy vinyl windows. 2.Due to its durability and lower production costs, vinyl is a superior material for windows compared to aluminum.
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Pros and Cons of Fracking. 60minutes.com. CBS, n.d. Web. 25 Nov. 2012.. Lesley Stahl presents the pros and cons of fracking. She interviews executives with both an environmental organization, the Sierra Club, and Chesapeake Energy, to present the dangers humans have encountered in fracking, like polluted well water. She also presents the benefits of fracking, including increased employment and creation of natural gas from local sources.
I 1.In the last two years we have discovered the equivalent of two Saudi Arabias of oil in the form of natural gas, according to Aubrey McClendon, former CEO of Chesapeake Energy. (Pros and Cons of Fracking). I 2. Gas has nearly half the carbon emissions of coal and no mercury, so we should frack (Pros and Cons of Fracking). I 3.An underground explosion is impossible because there is no oxygen to ignite a blast. –Lesley Stahl, reporter for 60 Minutes., according to 60 Minutes reporter Lesley Stahl in her episode entitled, Pros and Cons of Fracking. I 4. Lesley Stahl said that fracking is noisy and dirty (Pros and Cons of Fracking). C 5. We have good reason to worry about the safety of fracking because the industry has racked up thousands of accidents and safety violations above ground (Pros and Cons of Fracking). I 6. On a farm in a rural area in the eastern United States, 17 cows died a gruesome death after drinking fracking fluid., reported Lesley Stahl, a reporter for 60 Minutes (Pros and Cons of Fracking).. C 7. Even the former CEO of a large energy company says that [i]f people are involved, accidents are going to happen (Pros and Cons of Fracking, McClendon). I 8. I agree with Micheal Brune, Executive Director of the Sierra Club, when he says, [t]he first thing they should do is disclose what chemicals are being used, and then limit the amount of toxic chemicals to the point of zero (Pros and Cons of Fracking).
Correct ways to use in-text citation We have good reason to worry about the safety of fracking because the industry has racked up thousands of accidents and safety violations above ground says 60 Minutes reporter Lesley Stahl (Pros and Cons of Fracking). An underground explosion is impossible because there is no oxygen to ignite a blast, according to 60 Minutes reporter Lesley Stahl in her episode entitled, Pros and Cons of Fracking. When you finish, 1.Name and period # on rubric 2.Check off everything you did on the back of the rubric. If you didnt do something, do it now! 3. Single space editorial and bibliography and print 4. Staple rubric, editorial, and annotated bibliography
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