2. 1 Using Focus Marking and Peer Assessment in Composition Writing and Marking Mr Leung Fook Kay LST Young Ko Hsiao Lin Secondary School

3. 2 Detailed marking of an essay by a F1 student

4. 3 1.Problems with detailed marking Teachers: Frustrated because Many mistakes; Similar mistakes time and again; Students cant learn effectively from marking

5. 4 1.Problems with detailed marking Students: put off by red marks; an eyesore; have difficult in correcting; can t remember so many correct forms can t avoid making similar mistakes, Because: - learn little from mistakes - learn little from teacher s marking

6. 5 Vicious circle Students make many mistakes Detailed marking Learn little from mistakes

7. 6 1.Consulted: Assessment for Learning (AFL) guidelines (Task-based Assessment for English Language Learning at Secondary Level, CDI 2. Other literature 3. Reflected on experience How can students learn to write with fewer mistakes?

8. 7 One at a time! Writing = How to acquire the skill?

9. 8 Can it help students to focus on using accurately one grammar item at a time? = = focus marking? One at a time And eventually, write with fewer mistakes?

10. 9 2. What is focus marking? Objective of write – practice use of a grammar item : - recently learnt (e.g. past tense) - or that requires remedial work (e.g. There have (are) 15 boys in my class.) Teacher concentrates on assessing students use of the grammar item(s) in question. -- J. Harmer (2004) How to teach writing, Longman

11. 10 Plan focus marking in 20 classes of F1-3 Implement Evaluate Cycle of project work

12. 11 4. Objective: - help students concentrate on using the grammar item in question students use the grammar item accurately - help Teacher focus on marking the grammar item in question Teacher gives quality feedback

13. 12 5. Implementation 1.T explained writing task. ( Annex 1) Annex 1 2.T explained assessment criteria. ( Annex 2 & 3) Annex 2 3.S did writing task. 4.T used focus marking. 5.Remedial work (correcting common mistakes) 6.S corrected own mistakes. 7.Teacher checked S s corrections

14. 13 5. Implementation 1.T explained writing task. ( Annex 1) Annex 1 2.T explained assessment criteria. ( Annex 2 & 3) Annex 2 6. S corrected own mistakes. 7. Teacher checked S s corrections ( End of implementation) 3. S did writing task. 4. T used focus marking. 5. Remedial work (correcting common mistakes

15. 14 6. Interim evaluation Survey on teachers opinions All our 13 English teachers responded. Some did not answer all the questions. The answers are analyzed as follows.

16. 15 How helpful is focus marking? No.Different aspects of focus marking Very useful Quite usefu l Not quite Not at all 1.Focused on some grammar items 69%31% 2.Focused on some contents 23%77% 3.Easier to mark23%69% 4.Mark sheet format23%61.5 % 7.7% 5.Focused on organization 23%31% 6. Focus marking as a whole 31%54%

17. 16 Q 6. How useful is the focus marking exercise as a whole?

18. 17 Positive feedback: Student performance improved i.e. fewer mistakes were made. Clear requirements & examples Students found it easier to do the writing task. Teachers found marking a less grueling task.

19. 18 Other opinions: Giving students clear instructions & requirements is crucial. Teachers must refrain from correcting every mistake. Do focus marking with them.

20. 19 Other opinions: Teachers must be relieved of guilty feelings – not doing their job. Method: - explain rationale; - seek support of principal & parents (Content page)

21. 20 Focus marking will be used to assess students work. The teacher will focus on marking certain type(s) of mistakes, certain parts or format so that students can learn more effectively. Marks are given to content, organization and language accuracy. CONTENT PAGE No.DateTitle/DescriptionFocus AreaMarks Designed by Ms W. S. Cheung

22. 21 Vicious circle Students make many mistakes Detailed marking Learn little from mistakes Enhance ? fewer Focus

23. 22 Can assessing their peer s work help students remember the correction forms remember the correction forms and use the grammar items accurately in future?

24. 23 3. What is peer assessment? Students assess peers work with the help of some clear and specific guidelines. -- P. Weeden (2002) Assessment – Whats in it for schools?,Routledge

25. 24 2 nd Cycle of project work Plan peer assessment In 6 classes of F3 Implement Evaluate

26. 25 4. Objective: - Students use focus marking to assess peer s work Students learn through assessing peer s work - Teachers use focus marking to assess students work Teacher gives quality feedback

27. 26 7. Implementation of Cycle 2 1.T explained writing task. 2.T explained assessment criteria. 3.S did writing task. 4.T used focus marking to sample correct about 5 student works 5.T trained students to use focus marking to assess peer s work (by correcting common mistakes focused on the grammar item in question.) 6.S assessed peer s work. 7.Teacher did focus marking. 8. Students compared S and T assessment results. ( Annex 5) Annex 5 9. Students corrected their own mistakes. ( Annex 6) Annex 6) 10. Teacher checked students correction. (End of implementation)

28. 27 Limitations- room for improvement: 1.Didn t measure student improvement quantitatively. 2.No descriptors for marks 1 to 5 in feedback form. 3.Need for a resource bank (e.g. common mistakes) for students. 4. ……………. ?

29. 28 1.Survey student opinions (more exercises and more skilful peer assessors ). Evaluation (to be done) 2. Compare students performance before and after the practice.

30. 29 - introduce the practice to other levels - introduce the practice to other subjects The way ahead - sustainability of project Open up other professional development areas, e.g. peer assessment in oral presentation ( trying out in F6 & 7)

31. 30 8. Conclusion of this sharing Teacher s reflection is necessary. Give priority to effectiveness of learning. Quality feedback holds the key to effective learning.

32. 31 ONE AT A TIME!

33. 32 THANK YOU!

34. 33 Writing: Sample Sub-paper Your cousin Paul from Canada is visiting Hong Kong. You were on a tour of Hong Kong with him. Your teacher wants you to write a short article about the tour for the school magazine. Describe what happened and how you felt about the tour in approximately 150 words. You can use the following pictures to help you write your article. They show what you saw and did during the tour. ? Annex 1

35. 34 LANGUAGE & ACCURACYRemarks Language patterns Use of and, first, then etc. (First, we took a tram to the Peak Tower …. Then we took some photos of the harbour.) Use of reported speech. (Paul said that he was hungry.) Use of direct speech. ( Shall we have dim sum for lunch? said I.) Language accuracy Are the verbs used in the correct tense? For example: We look ( looked ) over the beautiful Victoria Harbour when we are (were ) on the Peak Tower.) Do the verbs agree with the subjects/nouns in number? For example: a. We was (were ) very happy. b. There were four girl (girls ) and five boys in the Ocean Park Tour Group. Student s Marks 012345 Teacher s Marks 012345 Other comments: …………………………………………………………… Checked by: ……………… Date: / /2006 Marks before correction: Marks after correction: Annex 2 Only in Peer marking LOK SIN TONG YOUNG KO HSIAO LIN SECONDARY SCHOOL Teacher s Feedback Form

36. 35 Language accuracy Are the verbs used in the correct tense? For example: We look (looked ) over the beautiful Victoria Harbor when we are (were ) on the Peak Tower. Remarks Do the verbs agree with the subjects/nouns in number? For example: a. We was (were) very happy. b. There were four girl (girls) and five boys in the Ocean Park Tour Group. Teacher s Marks 012345 The teacher will consider MAINLY the following areas when marking your work. (From the focus marking feedback form) Annex 3

37. 36 Annex 5

38. 37 Annex 6