Presentation on theme: "Daily Oral Language Week 1"— Presentation transcript:
1 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 1a. president clinton of the united states together with the leaders of several south american countries have agreed to new meetings on economic developmentb. dana told raphael that they has got to leave their house early today to make it to the museum to see the exhibit of brazilian art on time
2 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Correct Sentences 1a. President Clinton of the United States, together with the leaders of several South American countries, has agreed to new meetings on economic development.b. Dana told Raphael that they have to leave their house early today to make it to the museum to see the exhibit of Brazilian art.
3 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 2a. there are many people in this audience who cant except the idea that the Worlds climate will continue to change if people dont act quickb. helen, try and arrive before 930pm so that their will be time for us to visit julie said
4 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Correct Sentences 2a. Many people in this audience can’t accept the idea that the word’s climate will change if people don’t act quickly.b. “Helen, try to arrive before 9:30 P.M. so that there will be time for us to visit,” Julie said.Note that AP Style for journalists is different:9:30 P.M. becomes 9:30 pm
5 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 3a. having won the game a visit to ray’s pizza palace was offered to the team by the principleb. that husky which is a champion is a consistent winner at dog shows but I don’t believe it will win tonight
6 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Correct Sentences 3a. Having won the game, the team was invited to Ray’s Pizza Palace by the principal.b. That husky, a champion, is a consistent winner at dog shows, but I don’t believe that it will win tonight.
7 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 4a. youre version of ralph waldo emersons essay self reliance is different than mine i wonder whyb. neither of the events were exciting so we left early then we went to sharons house to play a video game
8 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Corrected Sentences 4a. I wonder why your version of Ralph Waldo Emerson’s essay “Self-Reliance” is different from mine.b. Neither of the events was exciting, so we left early and went to Sharon’s house to play a video game.
9 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Proofreading Sentences 5a. my Uncle and Aunt will unknown to him be surprised next week at the anniversary celebration at the sheldon community centerb. please bring this book the scarlet letter to the deans room omar since he needs it
10 Daily Oral Language Week 1 Grade 11 Corrected Sentences 5a. My uncle and aunt will be surprised next week at an anniversary celebration at the Sheldon Community Center.b. Please take this book, The Scarlet Letter, to the dean’s room, Omar, since he needs it.Note that when you type, you have the option of underlining titles or putting them in italics. Underlining and italics function in the same manner.
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