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2. One of the most useful things that the technology offers us nowadays is for sure worldwide communication 24 hours a day, using mobile phones, computers and many other internet-connected devices.

3. One of the most useful things that technology offers us nowadays is certainly worldwide communication 24 hours a day, by way of mobile phones, computers and many other internet-connected devices.

4. For example, if one of our friends feels depressed because he has been arguing with his girlfriend, we will know it through a simple message he writes us or reading a post in his home on Facebook.

5. For example, if one of our friends feels depressed because he has been arguing with his girlfriend, we will know about it with a simple message he has written us or a post we have read on his Facebook home page.

6. … the possibility of video recording a lesson and use it at home. … the possibility of video recording a lesson and using it at home.

7. Nowadays technology has become one of the main aspects in our everyday life. Nowadays technology has become one of the main aspects in our everyday lives. Nowadays technology has become one of the main aspects of everyday life.

8. In addition we’re becoming shallower in our rapport with others, which are getting always colder. In addition we’re becoming shallower in our rapport with others, which are getting colder and colder.