1. IncorporatingStyle Examples “When one is blessed with an unearned abundance of love, he or she may call it grace.”

2. IncorporatingStyle As I walked downstairs to see her I would sing,”down the stairs and to the right to grandmother’s house we go.” I looked up to her. I loved her dearly.

3. IncorporatingStyle “My grandpa’s stroke was probably the worst thing that has happened in his life, but it just may be the best thing that happened to mine.”

4. IncorporatingStyle “Reynoldsville is a redneck nightmare.”

5. IncorporatingStyle “True confidence was lurking inside me, but it took a true role model to bring it out.”

6. IncorporatingStyle “Perhaps it was my childish mind that glorified these memories, placing them on a pedestal far from my young adult reach.”

7. IncorporatingStyle “Some people never meet their father, others wish they didn’t and some wish they could always be with him.”

8. IncorporatingStyle “Some answers aren’t found in classrooms or in books, but on the front porch of a duplex, talking with someone who really understands.”

9. IncorporatingStyle “It is unusual to find a household of just mom, dad and child.” In Spain, homes are filled with uncles, aunts, cousins, grandparents and love.”

10. Who v. That “That” indicates a less human quality. Use who when referring to people and that when referring to things or objects. But Mrs. Lehman, why?

11. Who v. That What does this phrase convey? “the woman that married my father.” Tone – When we do this, there can be a feeling or tone of animosity conveyed. Can you hear it?