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BY LOGAN DORMAN It was hot outside today. I live in the town of Greensville, Pennsylvania. We have a weird mountain in our town. I’m Logan and I’m 9.

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3 It was hot outside today. I live in the town of Greensville, Pennsylvania. We have a weird mountain in our town. I’m Logan and I’m 9 years old. I am at my house watching TV with my friends Colin, Joey, and Gorge.[ I don’t really like Gorge]. My dog Sonic was lying on my lap. “Logie don’t forget to feed your fly trap!” my sister Samantha said.

4 “Sure and don’t call me Logie!”I said. Then I decided we should go outside. We went down stairs. Then George said he had to get his gum. We waited 1 hour. “I think he snuck out the back door. What a nuisance!”I said. So then I went back up stairs. Then I noticed his receipt and his gum. The receipt said magic gum. Weird, I thought. Then I saw my fly trap eating the gum! Before I could get the gum something amazing happened he disappeared.

5 Where did he go? A mystery was set to find my fly trap. The next day I woke up it was hot again like yesterday my friends were going to look for my fly trap today. So I went outside. To my surprise Colin was the only one out. “ Where are the others?” I asked. He shrugged his shoulders. “I think I found a clue” he said. It was a penny covered in blue goop. “GROSS!”I said in disgust. “Let’s just go!”he said.

6 All of a sudden the ground started to shake. “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! “It ate our friends!”Colin screamed. That was when I knew I was doomed.

7 Colin and I ran past town scared and confused. That was when we saw the biggest fly trap ever! We both exchanged frightened glances. GGGGGGGGGGIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! “My fly trap!” It splattered blue goop on my neighbor’s house and it melted.

8 I thought about the craziest idea ever …. I had to go in it. What choice do I have? Here I go.

9 I jumped into it’s mouth. It was hot and sticky. I fell down it’s throat. I landed on a car floating in the stomach acid. There was a hole on the side filled with blue goop. I stuck a boulder in the hole. “Grab on!” a voice yelled. The voice threw a rope down. I did as he instructed. As I climbed out I noticed the fly trap got bigger!

10 I climbed out. The fly trap kept growing. It grew as big as the Empire state building! “SHE’S GONNA BLOW!” Colin yelled. Colin and I hid behind the goo covered house. BOOOM!!! I spotted my fly trap and George. When they hit the ground I said, “Why did you do that ?” I looked down at him. He looked like he was dead.

11 “Ohhh” he moaned. “He’s knocked out,” I said. When he woke up he moaned, “OWW!” Just then the ground started to shake. A volcano rose out of the ground. “HELP!” someone called. The volcano had erupted. “OWWWW!” I yelled. The volcano had killed me.

12 I woke up to see Sonic licking my face. “What a dream!” I said to Sonic. He licked me again. “Down boy, down!” I checked to see if my fly trap was there. Sure enough it was there. But it had a lump in it’s stomach. “Samantha!” I yelled. Where was she? Then the fly trap spit out a white cloth. Oh no it ate her!


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